some_freak82
Virgin
- Joined
- Nov 6, 2002
- Posts
- 2
Still Looking for Female Editor
Hello,
I recently took up writing again after almost a decade of abstinence. I've been having a lot of fun with it, but I'm not certain if my story is coming out how I intend it or if the flow is easily followed. I don't particularly need someone to help with spelling and I'm not too worried about my grammar. I need someone who reads a lot to give an honest examination of my ability to put forth a coherent story.
Currently, I have about 56 pages written, broken up into 5 sections. About 3/4ths of it is in second draft form. If you need, I can give you small sections at a time to work with, but the beginning chapter is where I think I need the most work. To that end, you will probably need to see where I take the later chapters, so I would definitely appreciate someone who has the time to read through a lot of amateur work. I don't have a specific end point in sight, perhaps you could help me work on an ending. If not, I don't mind at all.
At this time, I only have male/female sexual relations going on(though there is mention of lesbianism) and I am moving in a female/female direction. It will be posted in the "Mind Control" category, but my efforts have largely been towards making it consensual(I know, a bit of a contradiction, but I'm trying). There is also exhibition, masturbation(not very defined), oral sex, and sexual intercourse.
My biggest concerns center around the characters and their interactions. I'm not too worried about the main character, but there are three main female characters that I'm not too sure if they actually have any personality. Any help in this regard is very much appreciated.
As well, my sexual experience is limited, at best. A guiding hand where the sex scenes are concerned is almost certainly going to be necessary. I haven't made any blunders where the main character has a 30 inch cock or anything, but the sexy part of erotic stories is in anticipation and I'm not sure I've done well on making that stick.
I'm willing to accept the help of a male editor, but I've spent most of my life around women and find I work better with them.
Thank you for your time.
Edit:
I haven't heard from FallenAngel11 for almost 5 days now and I haven't even been able to get my story to her. I do not want to defame her in anyway, but I'd really like the help of an editor. If you're willing to help, please send me a private message with how much of my story you're willing to help with and how you'd like me to get it to you.
Hello,
I recently took up writing again after almost a decade of abstinence. I've been having a lot of fun with it, but I'm not certain if my story is coming out how I intend it or if the flow is easily followed. I don't particularly need someone to help with spelling and I'm not too worried about my grammar. I need someone who reads a lot to give an honest examination of my ability to put forth a coherent story.
Currently, I have about 56 pages written, broken up into 5 sections. About 3/4ths of it is in second draft form. If you need, I can give you small sections at a time to work with, but the beginning chapter is where I think I need the most work. To that end, you will probably need to see where I take the later chapters, so I would definitely appreciate someone who has the time to read through a lot of amateur work. I don't have a specific end point in sight, perhaps you could help me work on an ending. If not, I don't mind at all.
At this time, I only have male/female sexual relations going on(though there is mention of lesbianism) and I am moving in a female/female direction. It will be posted in the "Mind Control" category, but my efforts have largely been towards making it consensual(I know, a bit of a contradiction, but I'm trying). There is also exhibition, masturbation(not very defined), oral sex, and sexual intercourse.
My biggest concerns center around the characters and their interactions. I'm not too worried about the main character, but there are three main female characters that I'm not too sure if they actually have any personality. Any help in this regard is very much appreciated.
As well, my sexual experience is limited, at best. A guiding hand where the sex scenes are concerned is almost certainly going to be necessary. I haven't made any blunders where the main character has a 30 inch cock or anything, but the sexy part of erotic stories is in anticipation and I'm not sure I've done well on making that stick.
I'm willing to accept the help of a male editor, but I've spent most of my life around women and find I work better with them.
Thank you for your time.
Edit:
I haven't heard from FallenAngel11 for almost 5 days now and I haven't even been able to get my story to her. I do not want to defame her in anyway, but I'd really like the help of an editor. If you're willing to help, please send me a private message with how much of my story you're willing to help with and how you'd like me to get it to you.
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