Looking for female editor

[stoppiello]

This is my first attempt at erotica and i was hoping to find a female point of view for 3 things.

1) Structural editing. I tend to write as I think, or as a conversation and thoughts would happen, for good or bad.
2) Help finding a title for it, nothing I come up with I like.
3) Is it any good? honestly, i don't know if others would find it that way


The reason I ask for a female editor is simple. Within my writing group, where the challenge of writing a story like this was given to me, it is being looked at by a male, and I would like the opposite point of view for it.

It is about 7700 words long, or just over 9 pages in MS Word. A thank you in advance to anyone who is willing to help.

 

[Dyros]

Happy to look at your work

Feel free to PM me if you're still looking for a read through. Firstly, what category would you place it in? People have preferences and might need to know that first.

 

[sr71plt]

You're likely to get more (and better targeted) interest if you provide the category of the story. There's a big difference between Romance and BDSM, for instance.