Looking for feedback

[kromen]

I posted a new story for the Valentine's Day contest and would love to get some comments on it. I posted it on the last day of the entry deadline, so I wasn't looking to win, but to build my base of readership. It's a quirky story about a couple who seeks marriage counseling on V-Day. Hope you like it.

http://www.literotica.com/s/whatever-you-wish

 

[kromen]

Throwing a bump in the thread. The contest is over, so it's not about votes, but readership. Tell me what you think.