Looking for feedback

[Max47]

I have 8 submitted stories with another pending. Would like some feedback on Rental with Benefits in Erotic Couplings section. Am looking for input from writers rather than readers. If anyone has the time or inclination, would appreciate any feedback on my other stories.
Link to my stories is below.
Thanks, Max47

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=878811&page=submissions

 

[August_Bouvier]

Please post a link to them.

While I don't mind, some folks prefer it if they don't have to take the extra steps to do a story or member search to find your submissions.