Hello,
I'm simply looking for a bit of feedback regarding a story I posted a while back in the Gay Male category. It is titled "Seniors in Heat". Not very original I know. Right now I'm just hammering out the mechanics since i'm a bit rusty and havn't written anything in quite a while. Any feed back is appreciated.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=14079
Thank You,
Acheyltus
I'm simply looking for a bit of feedback regarding a story I posted a while back in the Gay Male category. It is titled "Seniors in Heat". Not very original I know. Right now I'm just hammering out the mechanics since i'm a bit rusty and havn't written anything in quite a while. Any feed back is appreciated.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=14079
Thank You,
Acheyltus
