Hi there, I've recently posted my first erotic story and am really wanting some feedback on it, like if it was good or bad, what parts were good or bad, how the writing style is, where the story could go next ect ect. The story's called "The Girl Kneeling in the Foyer." If you can't find it when searching for it go on my profile and onto stories and you'll find it there, please and thank you
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