Looking for feedback on my stories...sorry if too dirty

[blooke1234]

They are a little out there but if you are into it then let me know what you think.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=475035

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=475701

Thanks.

 

[Sanichi]

Whoa nelly

Not so much "out there" as 'in' - you might warn readers the category for the first chapter of the story is Anal.