Looking for feedback on my high school story [Work in progress]

[Cybran]

This is a part of my new story about a high school teacher who is obsessed with his 18 year old student.
That's not the whole story as work is still in progress. It's just a short preview.

I am looking forward to all kinds of founded criticism.
Have fun reading.

Today it was Laura’s turn for her oral exam. Although the oral exams are unheralded I had a feeling that she knew was the chosen one as soon as she entered the class room. Her skirt was even shorter than usual which granted me a better view of her slender legs. It was hard for me to keep my view away from her firm butt while she was on her way to her seat.

The other students assembled in the classroom and I started the lesson as usual.
“Last lesson our topic was the second derivative of the function f. And today’s repetition is up to…”

I looked down to my notes even though I definitely knew whose name I was about to call.

“…Laura.”
My eyes met hers and contrary to what any normal student would have done in this situation, she gave me a beautiful smile instead of an appalled gaze. I liked the sparkling of her white teeth which perfectly harmonized with her bright red lips.
“Please come to the board an take your calculator and your textbook with you.”

She was on her way to the front when she told me that she had forgotten her own book, therefore we had to share mine which lay on the desk right in front of me.
“It is exercise number 3 on page 77” I told the class.

I smelled her sweet scent when she stood right behind me while she was reading the task.
Her auburn hair adulated to her tender face when she had a close look to the book. I could feel that a bulge in my pants had just started to grow.

She turned towards the blackboard and started to write down the function. My eyes were locked to her body while she stretched to reach the top of the board. Laura wore a white sleeveless top which finished just right above her red skirt. When she reached out to the board a part of her back and her butt cheeks were visible. I wondered why nobody of the other students giggled about that view but the class remained silent.

The math problem was now completely out of my mind, the only thing I was focused on was Laura. She turned her head back because she struggled with one part of the problem. She gave me a smile and came nearer to my desk in order to have one more look to the task. While she bent towards the book her naked arm touched mine. My hard-on was now clearly visible for her, even through my jeans. Her face was only inches from me and her incredible fragrance obscured my senses.

When she got back to the front her hand accidentantly touched the bulge in my pants. Now the other students did not bother me anymore. I also ignored the fact that I actually was her math teacher and Laura was taking an exam. I just stood up from my chair and walked towards her.

I touched her by her hip and started to kiss her carefully at her neck. I felt no sign of resistance. She threw the chalk to the floor and turned back to me. Our tongues met and we started to kiss wildly. I lifted up her shirt. She didn’t wear a bra so I gently touched her now uncovered tits while I felt her opening my belt. With one move she removed my jeans and my shorts.

Laura started to jerk of my now fully-grown cock. Her young hands felt undescribable. I needed her now. There was nothing on the entire planet which could have stopped me from fulfilling my dream right there. I lifted her up and pressed her against the blackboard. She crossed her legs behind my back and placed her handy in my neck. During all of that we shared passionate kisses.

I moved away her skirt and she helped me to position my cock right before her pussy. I entered her slowly with only the tip of my cock. She let out a quite moan when I started to penetrate her deeper. I could feel my balls tighten up and I was already close to cumming. I quickened my movements and she responded with louder moans. I was intoxicated by the fact that all of my fantasies were just coming true. I moved even faster in and out of her dripping wet pussy. Soon I couldn’t hold it any longer and started to scream:

“Laura, I am about to... to... Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!”

Cum was shooting out of my cock with one wave after another. The world around me was dark. Only after my orgasm faded I realized where I was.
I was at home in my bed. My pajama was soaked in sweat and I just had jizzed in my pants. The whole oral exam was just a wet dream. I looked to the alarm clock. It was just 02:43 and now I needed something to drink.

 

[the_apocalypse]

If the rest of the story is as hot as this I will look forward to reading it. I liked the fact that this snippet was just a dream and will be interested to see if the teacher actually gets to re-enact the dream for real.