Hi all,
Being new here, I'm looking for as much feedback as I can. I currently have one story up and several more in the works. It seems that I'm taking this rather seriously, which I hope is a good thing. In turn, I want to write the best I can, so I'm looking for input. Good or bad. Constructive or not. I'll take it any way I can get it.
The link to my first story is below. Thanks in advance.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=24389
Being new here, I'm looking for as much feedback as I can. I currently have one story up and several more in the works. It seems that I'm taking this rather seriously, which I hope is a good thing. In turn, I want to write the best I can, so I'm looking for input. Good or bad. Constructive or not. I'll take it any way I can get it.
The link to my first story is below. Thanks in advance.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=24389
