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Wind7sailor
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HI, I'm wind7sailor and I've been writing my first story series called "Sailing Away From Reality" chapters 1-4 in the mind control section.
http://english.literotica.com/stories/stories_by_category.php?category=29&page=10
I've enjoyed writing this story, but not being a writer, I've made some mistakes and my chapters have been quite long to read in one sitting.
I'm wondering if I should continue to describe what happens to Joe with each woman, one chapter at a time or just do one condensed chapter of highlights from the best of Joe hypnotic adventures during the rest of the week with each women or groups of women.
If I did the condensed chapter, I could complete the story with an additional two final chapters. I trust I need to make my chapters shorter. I could use your feedback. Joe (Wind7sailor)
http://english.literotica.com/stories/stories_by_category.php?category=29&page=10
I've enjoyed writing this story, but not being a writer, I've made some mistakes and my chapters have been quite long to read in one sitting.
I'm wondering if I should continue to describe what happens to Joe with each woman, one chapter at a time or just do one condensed chapter of highlights from the best of Joe hypnotic adventures during the rest of the week with each women or groups of women.
If I did the condensed chapter, I could complete the story with an additional two final chapters. I trust I need to make my chapters shorter. I could use your feedback. Joe (Wind7sailor)