Looking for Feedback - A Spider's Web

[Lithium_hobo]

Having finally finished and recently posted the last two chapters (one being an epilogue) of my story spanning several years (99% due to procrastination), I'm looking for some critique on my work. I'm not terribly happy with how my last couple of chapters turned out (most notably #8), but it's my own fault. I didn't spend a lot of time on it, and when it was done I just wanted to get it in so it would be finished. If I was to go back and add/subtract, it'd never be complete (I'm terrible at ending things - even this request is going on too long).

That said, I'd like to get some feedback on the overall quality of the story, or just chapter by chapter. Look forward to reading your reviews and growing from it!

 

[jeanvaljean23]

ohhk.. i'll definely readthe remaining chapters... so far so good.. lets hope the next chap will also live to my expectations

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Having finally finished and recently posted the last two chapters (one being an epilogue) of my story spanning several years (99% due to procrastination), I'm looking for some critique on my work. I'm not terribly happy with how my last couple of chapters turned out (most notably #8), but it's my own fault. I didn't spend a lot of time on it, and when it was done I just wanted to get it in so it would be finished. If I was to go back and add/subtract, it'd never be complete (I'm terrible at ending things - even this request is going on too long).

That said, I'd like to get some feedback on the overall quality of the story, or just chapter by chapter. Look forward to reading your reviews and growing from it!

Etiquette here demands you give us a link 'cos we're lazy so-and-sos.

Try this: http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=840599&page=submissions

Again, expecting us to read nine chapters is a pretty big ask. What is it exactly you want feedback on. You seem to be getting pretty good scores.

I'll have a look later and come back.