Looking for editor :)

[FlyAwayFromHere]

I have written a current day MMF (straight) story. -

young man and shy wife newly married spend night over her childhood family friends house.

i am intending for it to be a series.

I would like an editor if anyone is available.

Thanks in advance, Fly x

 

[trace_ekies]

'Loving Wives' has always been one of my favorite categories. I'm not a member of the volunteer editors group but a story I co-authored ten years ago, (Sunrise at Sea), was selected by the readers of Literotica as the best submission in the 'Loving Wives' category during that calendar year. I'd like to take a look at what you have and see if I can be of help. PM me if you'd like to pursue this further.

 

[bikoukumori]

I wouldn't mind taking a look.

 

[FlyAwayFromHere]

sorry i forgot to reply, my hubby ended up editing it as the person who replied here first did not reply in pm quick enough for me (i am impatient). although if you wanted to read it you can find it on my blog. It is called Jasmine.

(Link in sig).

 

[trace_ekies]

...the person who replied here first did not reply in pm quick enough for me (i am impatient)...
(Link in sig).

Either there is something wrong with my PM system or a user-error problem with it. I have made a check for new PM's several times a day since making the offer and have not seen anything. I have just checked now again and find nothing from you. Probably user-error (on my part). Sorry I didn't get a chance to help out. I think it would have been fun.

 

[bikoukumori]

Either there is something wrong with my PM system or a user-error problem with it. I have made a check for new PM's several times a day since making the offer and have not seen anything. I have just checked now again and find nothing from you. Probably user-error (on my part). Sorry I didn't get a chance to help out. I think it would have been fun.

Do you know if you have the ability turned on? You need "enable private messaging" checked in "edit options" in the usercp.

 

[trace_ekies]

Do you know if you have the ability turned on? You need "enable private messaging" checked in "edit options" in the usercp.

Yes, I have just checked. It is turned on. Also I have several PM's in there that I have received recently, but none related to this thread.

 

[observer7]

sorry i forgot to reply, my hubby ended up editing it as the person who replied here first did not reply in pm quick enough for me (i am impatient). although if you wanted to read it you can find it on my blog. It is called Jasmine.

(Link in sig).

Hm. High maintenance. Good luck building good will toward your future requests, if any.

Although you don't have to clarify "(straight)" if you use the acronyms correctly:

MMF: male in the middle, the males touch
MFM: female in the middle, the males do not touch

That's what those descriptions are for. A little help.

 

[FlyAwayFromHere]

thankyou for the info.

just to clarify, i had someone edit my work. it just happened to be someone quicker who i spoke to IRL.

trace - I sent you a message outlining the story and a link referring you to my blog where it was posted so you could copy paste it. i dont know why the message didnt go through =-/

 

[trace_ekies]

...trace - I sent you a message outlining the story and a link referring you to my blog where it was posted so you could copy paste it. i dont know why the message didnt go through =-/

It probably has something to do with you being 'Really Experienced' and me being just a 'Virgin'. Maybe if I spend another ten years on Literotica I'll figure out what I've done wrong.