Sonatatre
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This is my first time writing a story for literotica so i thought i should do it properly and ask for editor help. I have written stories before in my native language of swedish but it was mostly quite some years ago and now when i wanted to write again i thought that english is better. I do believe my english is very good but honestly i have not written any stories in english before so thought it was best to ask for an editor that can help eliminate any silly mistakes i might have made.
The story is about a young couple in college, Mark and Lisa, both 19 years old. They go home to Lisas family during summer and Lisa shares her sexual past with him. The first chapter is around 5600 words long and in that we meet Lisas first lover wich is her 42 year old neighbour Gwen. Lisa is dominant and Gwen is submissive.
In later chapters i plan to write about other older women they will share and among them will be Lisas mother so there might be some daughter/mother action but i havent decided what route to go there as it might also work to make that part without any actual sexual interaction between mother and daughter. Either way 19 year old Lisa will always be dominating the older women and Mark will join in.
I would like the editor to help with grammar mostly but would also appreciate if the editor could look at the overall flow and if something needs to be described more. For example i havent gone into much detail of what the characters look like as i was hoping that the readers can decide that on their own while reading. I would also like some advice on where to place the story on the site. I want it to be able to be in the same category for all chapters and weither that be erotic couplings, Mature or some other category that might be appropiate.
Hope to hear from someone soon.
Would appreciate female editors but anyone is welcome
Sonatatre
The story is about a young couple in college, Mark and Lisa, both 19 years old. They go home to Lisas family during summer and Lisa shares her sexual past with him. The first chapter is around 5600 words long and in that we meet Lisas first lover wich is her 42 year old neighbour Gwen. Lisa is dominant and Gwen is submissive.
In later chapters i plan to write about other older women they will share and among them will be Lisas mother so there might be some daughter/mother action but i havent decided what route to go there as it might also work to make that part without any actual sexual interaction between mother and daughter. Either way 19 year old Lisa will always be dominating the older women and Mark will join in.
I would like the editor to help with grammar mostly but would also appreciate if the editor could look at the overall flow and if something needs to be described more. For example i havent gone into much detail of what the characters look like as i was hoping that the readers can decide that on their own while reading. I would also like some advice on where to place the story on the site. I want it to be able to be in the same category for all chapters and weither that be erotic couplings, Mature or some other category that might be appropiate.
Hope to hear from someone soon.
Would appreciate female editors but anyone is welcome
Sonatatre
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