NocturnalFables
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- Apr 10, 2008
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Alright, after all these years I'm coming out of the lurking shadows - you thought I was going to say closet didn't you?
I have part one of a three part story ready for an editor. Looking for grammar corrections mostly but willing and able to take criticism and direction. It was mostly written to keep me writing while having problems with two other main stream short stories I've been working on.
The story is a man telling the story about how he found his best friend's daughter dancing in a strip club. Not a real deep story, mostly concerned with sex but does dip lightly into his evolving romantic relationship with her and another woman.
Thanks.
I have part one of a three part story ready for an editor. Looking for grammar corrections mostly but willing and able to take criticism and direction. It was mostly written to keep me writing while having problems with two other main stream short stories I've been working on.
The story is a man telling the story about how he found his best friend's daughter dancing in a strip club. Not a real deep story, mostly concerned with sex but does dip lightly into his evolving romantic relationship with her and another woman.
Thanks.
