PallMall09
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- Dec 4, 2008
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I don't want to just send out random messages to just anyone, I would rather find someone who is interested in the type of story I have written. If the editor is reading the type of story he/she enjoys then I feel that a much better job could be done as far as making sure it has good flow and the wording makes sense. The story I would like edited is an incest story involving mother and son. It has strong tones of mutual reluctance and light tones of mutual non-consent. It has nothing to do with anyone raping or forcing at all, just two people falling victim to circumstance and passion. I have used my spell checker and grammar checker although i am sure a word or two slipped through. I wouldn't mind someone proposing changes to make the story flow better if they see something that looks awkward, (it would be nice if those proposed changes were clearly marked). If anyone is interested please let me know what format you would like it in and I will get my story to you.
Thank you
Pall
Thank you
Pall