Looking for editor for my Mermaid story

[storyteller19]

The story takes place in the near future where the world has suffered from global warming but thanks to technology/ gene technology some of the worst effects are being held at bay. The bulk of the story takes place in an advanced city and human gene splicing is just starting to get introduced to the public.

The main character Sarah is a criminal who through a casino robbery gone wrong ends up undergoing gene-splicing to become a mermaid and working at the casino in order to reduce her sentence. She works as a sort of attraction for the casino, meeting its guests and swimming through the grand aquarium that goes throughout the casino. Her body is hypersensitive so she is always horny and her orgasms are stronger than when she had her human body. She has a love-hate relationship with the owner's daughter Rachel.

Part one of the story is around 8000 words long.

 

[greysam]

volunteer

Do you still need an editor? I'm not an official Lit editor but I can take a look.

 

[storyteller19]

Yeah I still need someone to look at it