Looking for editor for milf story

[Gamina]

Hello,

After a long writing break I decided to tackle an half written story about a recently divorced woman, who gets into a tricky situation with some of her sons friends.

Word editor took most of the grammar issues out but since English is my fourth language I sometimes fear I do not use the optimal words. And as I finished the first part I am wondering if it is good as is, or if I should just get going and add another scene or two.

Thanks in advance

 

[kenjisato]

Still looking for an editor?

 

[desecration]

I enjoyed reading this one:

https://www.literotica.com/s/when-a-mother-models

I have a few editorial suggestions, and some areas I'd focus on if I edited the next (word choice, verb tenses).