redzinger
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In UK English.
*I hear you all groan* sorry.
It's about 8k, I'm aiming to finish it off and get it off to someone later tonight/early this morning.
My main concern is if I'm going to piss off anyone in the BDSM community by inadvertently introducing something that wouldn't be acceptable or conversely, too many clichés . I've not written anything like this before; my female characters are usually the submissive type. So I don't need necessary need a line edit, just a read-through and pointers for anything that sounds 'off'.
Oh, and secondly if it's 'Valentine's' enough not to piss anyone off either.
It's a slow starter too with a fair bit of build-up/tension.
Anyone...ummm, interested?
Thanks.
*I hear you all groan* sorry.
It's about 8k, I'm aiming to finish it off and get it off to someone later tonight/early this morning.
My main concern is if I'm going to piss off anyone in the BDSM community by inadvertently introducing something that wouldn't be acceptable or conversely, too many clichés . I've not written anything like this before; my female characters are usually the submissive type. So I don't need necessary need a line edit, just a read-through and pointers for anything that sounds 'off'.
Oh, and secondly if it's 'Valentine's' enough not to piss anyone off either.
It's a slow starter too with a fair bit of build-up/tension.
Anyone...ummm, interested?
Thanks.
