Looking for editor for chapter 6 of my series

[ObsceneVices]

Hi...

My series My Mom's an OF Star is up with 5 stories. I am looking for an editor to edit the 6th on that series, based on feedback from mods.

It is in the taboo/incest category.
About 6.5K words. It could be the finale with options to extend.

Please message me here or directly if this is of interest to you.

Thank you

 

[AlinaX]

What was the feedback?

 

[ObsceneVices]

What was the feedback?

• Please fix the formatting of your dialogue. The essay "How to Make Characters Talk" in our Writer's Resources section has more information on the formatting of dialogue if you have further questions: https://www.literotica.com/s/how-to-make-characters-talk

Please feel free to re-submit the story after a Volunteer Editor has examined it