Looking for editor: fitness, workout, gym, loving wives

[curl4ever]

Found one. Thanks to all who took the time to check out this thread.

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[Angel Love]

The main characters are a husband and wife whose basement home gym becomes a springboard for erotic encounters. Ordinary workouts turn flirtatious, occasionally competitive, and passionate. Reality intrudes a bit, but mostly they get to enjoy great sex, and in my favorite chapters, they play out fantasies back in time to their first date. The sex is strictly single-partner hetero (before and after marriage), non-anal, and non-fetish, I suppose.

Chapter 1 is ready for editing, while the remaining chapters are about half done. I was thinking of waiting until they are finished to post them as a complete series, but I definitely would like feedback from an editor on Chapter 1 in order to improve the remaining chapters at an earlier stage.

So, no rush, but if you might be interested in previewing them or can suggest another editor who might be interested, please contact me by email (or private message) through my username, curl4ever. [Please forgive any newbie etiquette breaches. I've been reading this site for several months, but this is my first time on the editors forums.]

Sincerely, curl4ever

Per the "looking for editor" post, I am attaching the first few paragraphs of chapter 1 ...

“Since when did you get THOSE muscles?”

His wife’s exclamation startled and shocked John on so many different levels that he didn’t know what to think next. She had come downstairs and been watching him work out without his noticing; She hated the stacks of unpacked boxes cluttering the basement; She had an unspoken hostility towards his workouts, since sometime he used the exercise to relieve his sexual frustrations; And, in the past twenty years of marriage, she’d never so much as hinted that she liked his body.

John felt himself blush a bit with surprise and embarrassment. He quickly set down the curl bar, and stammered, “Well, I guess I have been working out more over the past year or so.” He never really thought of himself as muscular, having been born with a skinny frame, and he had to work hard to get any shape at all.

To her own surprise, Mary was also thrown off balance by her comment. She thought to herself, “‘Since when did you get THOSE muscles?’ Where did that line come from?” She did think John was still a tall, handsome guy, and she did rather like his shoulders. When she saw him just now, though, it transported her to high school days, when she went to the basketball games to watch the players in those tank shirts. She suddenly remembered that they had nice shoulders that had a neat transition into nice arms. The thought brought an unexpected but familiar tingle to her nipples that she hoped wouldn’t be too obvious. “Sorry to interrupt you,” she said, “but I thought I’d try the treadmill for a change, since it’s too cold and drizzly outside for a decent walk.” Trying to keep the conversation light, she looked around, and remarked, “I don’t remember such an elaborate set-up down here.”

Hello curl,

I would be more than happy to take a look at your story for you. You can send it to me at angel_love_53 if you are interested in my help . . . smiles.

 

[curl4ever]

Thank for editor responses

I appreciate receiving editor responses from AsylumSeeker and Angel Love.
Many thanks, curl4ever

 

[Angel Love]

I appreciate receiving editor responses from AsylumSeeker and Angel Love.
Many thanks, curl4ever

You are quite welcome . . . smiles.

 

[snooper]

Looking for editor: fitness, workout, gym, loving wives

An editor you may find here. Lit is fresh out of fitness, workouts, gyms, and especially loving wives. Those of us who got here a long time ago stole all of those.

 

[curl4ever]

Ha!

Perhaps some long-time members would be willing to trade some of their fitness, workouts, gyms, and especially loving wives for new stories or cash.

 

[curl4ever]

Chapter 1 posted

I was hoping this thread would be killed by now, but since it is still here, I thought I should update. Through my newbie error, I had initially posted Chapter 1 to "Loving Wives - Tales of adventurous married women & their mates," because "Romance - Candlelight, wine, and a soft kiss" sounded way too tame. After getting the public comment feedback and doing MUCH more reading in the categories, I requested that the submission editors move the story, which they kindly and very promptly did. If you are interested, you can read Chapter 1 here:
http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=254243
Thanks again for not laughing me out of town! - curl4ever

 

[curl4ever]

Chapter 2 submitted

I was hoping this thread would be killed by now. Since it is still here, I'll update... I have submitted Chapter 2 of "Workout Incentive." If it gets accepted, I'll post the breaking news here first.

 

[curl4ever]

Chapter 2 posted

Again, I would have hoped that this thread would be deleted to save bandwidth, but since it's not, let me announce that "Workout Incentive, Ch. 02" has been posted here:
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=257204

Thanks for your encouragement!
- curl4ever

(Update November 2006: I have two larger stories posted, "Fitness Contest" and "Outside Interests." I think they are a step up from those early "Workout Incentive" chapters, so you might want to check them out.)

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