Looking willing to edit a story I just wrote- my first for this site.
Story is a ~1850 word fetish piece, or at least with strong sneezing fetish overtones. Rough summary is a guy goes to a rub'n'tug massage parlor in Montreal, and the masseuse is allergic to the massage oil, which makes her sneeze. The sneezing doesn't really change the rub'n'tug "plot" any, just an added bonus for those of us who like that kind of thing.
I'd say it's ~95% done, mostly just grammar/word choice/flow...so hopefully a pretty easy edit.
Thanks in advance!
Story is a ~1850 word fetish piece, or at least with strong sneezing fetish overtones. Rough summary is a guy goes to a rub'n'tug massage parlor in Montreal, and the masseuse is allergic to the massage oil, which makes her sneeze. The sneezing doesn't really change the rub'n'tug "plot" any, just an added bonus for those of us who like that kind of thing.
I'd say it's ~95% done, mostly just grammar/word choice/flow...so hopefully a pretty easy edit.
Thanks in advance!
