Looking for editor / beta reader for Momcest story

[MotherloverSon]

I'm looking for an editor or a beta reader for a 11K word Momcest story. May write sequels if reception is good. Story has some romance and a little bit of mild Fem-dom.

Story told mostly from perspective of mother who realizes that she and her (legal) son are attracted to one another, and sets out to seduce him.

Somewhat inexperienced writer here.

 

[cripple92996]

vv

count me in

 

[DurtyQwerty]

Me too! (need an editor to look at my story and advise, that is!)

 

[MotherloverSon]

My story was rejected due to an alleged underage sexual relationship, even thought nothing happens sexually to the son until he's 18. I even included an 18th birthday party to make that clear! Does anyone have advice?

 

[Todger65]

My story was rejected due to an alleged underage sexual relationship, even thought nothing happens sexually to the son until he's 18. I even included an 18th birthday party to make that clear! Does anyone have advice?

In the story before he is 18, does the son accidentally or otherwise, hear or see sexual activity. If so this is counted as being involved and Laurel will reject it.

 

[MotherloverSon]

It got published: https://literotica.com/s/a-loving-mom-should-seduce-her-son