Looking for brutal editor for story

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Looking for someone to look over my interracial, gangbang story. Not looking for anything too demanding, just to check if the flow, does it make sense, did I switch tenses etc. Would prefer the editor to be as brutal and honest as possible.


I tried to make it different from most of the typical stories that are out there. I really hope I was able to make it interesting in a good way.

thanks