I think I'm all set at this point - thanks!
I've posted four stories on Literotica without the assistance of the VE program, but this time around I'm curious to learn how much better my story could be with a little independent TLC. My next story is complete except for changes you, dear editor, may suggest.
I'm looking primarily for storyline tweaks, improvements to flow, getting a better read. I'm not expecting to trouble you much over grammar and form, though I'll gladly accept corrections wherever I've overlooked something. My main concern is that I decided to write an all-woman story, one intended to appeal to both men and women who like bondage and discipline, and I most enjoy writing in 1st person, so I have to be a woman this time around, not something which comes naturally - and I want it to read true. So if there is a editor out there, especially a woman into BDSM who likes to switch, perhaps who has read some of my stories and enjoyed them, I'd love to hear from you - but I'd like to hear from you no matter what if you are interested in taking this on.
The story is named Executrix Khalidah - the title will suggest some of the themes. It's about 17,000 words long, will run about 5-6 Literotica frames. Nobody dies, except in the normal way before the story starts, but I hope that two of the participants (one being myself) think that they will as it progresses.
If your are interested, I'll be happy to send it your way. I believe I have private messages turned on...
With pleasure
Bondanon
I've posted four stories on Literotica without the assistance of the VE program, but this time around I'm curious to learn how much better my story could be with a little independent TLC. My next story is complete except for changes you, dear editor, may suggest.
I'm looking primarily for storyline tweaks, improvements to flow, getting a better read. I'm not expecting to trouble you much over grammar and form, though I'll gladly accept corrections wherever I've overlooked something. My main concern is that I decided to write an all-woman story, one intended to appeal to both men and women who like bondage and discipline, and I most enjoy writing in 1st person, so I have to be a woman this time around, not something which comes naturally - and I want it to read true. So if there is a editor out there, especially a woman into BDSM who likes to switch, perhaps who has read some of my stories and enjoyed them, I'd love to hear from you - but I'd like to hear from you no matter what if you are interested in taking this on.
The story is named Executrix Khalidah - the title will suggest some of the themes. It's about 17,000 words long, will run about 5-6 Literotica frames. Nobody dies, except in the normal way before the story starts, but I hope that two of the participants (one being myself) think that they will as it progresses.
If your are interested, I'll be happy to send it your way. I believe I have private messages turned on...
With pleasure
Bondanon
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