Hi folks, I'm working on a new story and hoping to repeat the success of my two "Warm Breeze" stories, one of which is about it break into the all time top twenty for it's genre. The theme will be a threesome with incest overtones but it is not really incest because I'm just not into that theme but recognize a lot of people seem to get off on that. So it is a guy who ends up in a tub with his girlfriend and her adoptive mother, a little bit twisted but all in good fun and hopefully titillating if that's your kink. There will be fun, sex and character development for potential sequel(s) if it is popular.
My first Warm Breeze story was well received but I ultimately re-wrote it as a sequel from a female perspective and that was received even better, the same may well happen here so if you happen to be a woman (I'm not) I think you might have some good valuable input there.
All my other stories were written without an editor and all required several irritating guess, edit, re-submit phases, always for grammar rule infringements. They all still have issues that slipped through and some story issues that I never bothered to correct. However this time I think I would like to try working with someone who can help me with ensuring what I write is within the Literotica rules as well as give story and style feedback. I've never worked with an editor before so it will be an experiment for me but if that is what you enjoy I would sure appreciate some help.
So here is my author profile, take a look and if you have an questions or are interested please let me know:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1098046
So far I've written about 1000 words of the new story as an introduction and it might run 10,000 in total - my longest complete story to date was 6,000 words. I'm writing with Google Docs and can export to pretty much any format you want. It would be nice to see some of the work you have written or edited before, either on this site or elsewhere - or perhaps do a short trial if this is your first bash at it.
Cheers,
Allitnil
My first Warm Breeze story was well received but I ultimately re-wrote it as a sequel from a female perspective and that was received even better, the same may well happen here so if you happen to be a woman (I'm not) I think you might have some good valuable input there.
All my other stories were written without an editor and all required several irritating guess, edit, re-submit phases, always for grammar rule infringements. They all still have issues that slipped through and some story issues that I never bothered to correct. However this time I think I would like to try working with someone who can help me with ensuring what I write is within the Literotica rules as well as give story and style feedback. I've never worked with an editor before so it will be an experiment for me but if that is what you enjoy I would sure appreciate some help.
So here is my author profile, take a look and if you have an questions or are interested please let me know:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1098046
So far I've written about 1000 words of the new story as an introduction and it might run 10,000 in total - my longest complete story to date was 6,000 words. I'm writing with Google Docs and can export to pretty much any format you want. It would be nice to see some of the work you have written or edited before, either on this site or elsewhere - or perhaps do a short trial if this is your first bash at it.
Cheers,
Allitnil
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