Hey there. I am looking for an editor to piece I wront more to get it out of my mind than anything else. It is a dream I had about an ex. Have no idea if I will post it, or if it is anygood as I have never tried writing this stuff down before last week. Never was good at the whole writing thing. I am just looking for basic editing, I did the spell check, but I know I have a decent amount of franment senteces. I am putting the first part of it in the thread. Thanks in advance for anyfeedback.
I am talking to you on the phone, on the way to visit you. Making sure you are home alone. I am coming to surprise you, who thinks I am still far away. Hoping you will be open to my surprise visit and what it means.
You smile when you open the door. The dog greets me and you put her outside with out saying a word. Just gave me a look. I am dressed in a silk cami, black blazer, short skirt, and black boots with high heels.
When you come in from putting the dog out I push you up against the wall, kissing you deeply, pushing myself against you. Pinning your arms against the wall,
Stopping to look at you, make sure it is all right. Desire showing in my eyes,
Seeing that desire being returned, I slowly kiss your neck,
Unbuttoning your shirt, slowly kissing every inch of you, nibbling here and there.
Running my hands all over you. Feeling your sexy ass, arms that are so strong, your back.
I feel you start to explore my body with your hands, twining your hands in my long curly hair.
Can feel the desire growing deep inside me, the wetness getting even worse, as just the thought of it as I drove already had me excited.
You are amazed I am wearing just my silk and lace camisole under my blazer, no bra.
I can hear you moan as you notice my hard nipples pushing against the silk.
I moan as I feel your touch against them, the touch I had longed for.
Sending waves of pleasure through out me.
I am at your waist now, slowly undoing your belt, kissing your abs.
Looking up at you, wanting you to see my desire, wanting to see yours as well.
Pulling down your pants relishing the feel of your body near mine. Rubbing my hands, face along you legs as I pull them down, careful to avoid you swollen member. Kissing your legs, inner thighs. I hear you moan, can feel your hands in my hair, trying to guide me to what you want. Your looking at me as I look at you, a begging, pleading look. Your moan almost a whimper.
I am talking to you on the phone, on the way to visit you. Making sure you are home alone. I am coming to surprise you, who thinks I am still far away. Hoping you will be open to my surprise visit and what it means.
You smile when you open the door. The dog greets me and you put her outside with out saying a word. Just gave me a look. I am dressed in a silk cami, black blazer, short skirt, and black boots with high heels.
When you come in from putting the dog out I push you up against the wall, kissing you deeply, pushing myself against you. Pinning your arms against the wall,
Stopping to look at you, make sure it is all right. Desire showing in my eyes,
Seeing that desire being returned, I slowly kiss your neck,
Unbuttoning your shirt, slowly kissing every inch of you, nibbling here and there.
Running my hands all over you. Feeling your sexy ass, arms that are so strong, your back.
I feel you start to explore my body with your hands, twining your hands in my long curly hair.
Can feel the desire growing deep inside me, the wetness getting even worse, as just the thought of it as I drove already had me excited.
You are amazed I am wearing just my silk and lace camisole under my blazer, no bra.
I can hear you moan as you notice my hard nipples pushing against the silk.
I moan as I feel your touch against them, the touch I had longed for.
Sending waves of pleasure through out me.
I am at your waist now, slowly undoing your belt, kissing your abs.
Looking up at you, wanting you to see my desire, wanting to see yours as well.
Pulling down your pants relishing the feel of your body near mine. Rubbing my hands, face along you legs as I pull them down, careful to avoid you swollen member. Kissing your legs, inner thighs. I hear you moan, can feel your hands in my hair, trying to guide me to what you want. Your looking at me as I look at you, a begging, pleading look. Your moan almost a whimper.
