Hi. I'm looking for a volunteer editor to edit a lesbian story I've written. It's not too long, but it's a little longer and more involved than your average porn scene that one sometimes finds here. Either a male editor or female editor is fine, but I'd actually love to have one person of each gender take a look at the story. I'm looking for help with spelling and grammar, but also with the story.
From a male editor I'd like to know whether the story/sex does it for him. From a female editor, (preferably one who enjoys stories about lesbians), I'd want to know not only does the story/sex do it for her, but does the dialogue and story ring true. Do women talk like this? Is the situation at least halfway realistic? Obviously, I am not a woman and probably don't think like a women. I'd love to know if I've done a decent enough job getting into the minds of women.
Anyway, I've probably said enough. Any offers would be appreciated.
Thanks,
Sam
From a male editor I'd like to know whether the story/sex does it for him. From a female editor, (preferably one who enjoys stories about lesbians), I'd want to know not only does the story/sex do it for her, but does the dialogue and story ring true. Do women talk like this? Is the situation at least halfway realistic? Obviously, I am not a woman and probably don't think like a women. I'd love to know if I've done a decent enough job getting into the minds of women.
Anyway, I've probably said enough. Any offers would be appreciated.
Thanks,
Sam
