Looking for an editor

[onedegreeaway]

I had to make a few changes to conform to site rules, minor ones that may throw things off. Also a look at some grammar, please.

I'm too close to my story to objectively analyze it properly.

Moi

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

You might get a better response if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

You might also get a better response if you specify the genre of your story, and its length (in words) as these factors play a large part in a volunteer editor's decision whether to offer help.

 

[LizKitten]

I'd offer, but I'd prefer that you give me some more specifics about your particular project.