I just finished writing my first erotic story. It has already been edited by NickThePoet. Since he is straight, he suggested that a gay editor might help with the erotic parts. He didn't touch my grammar or spelling, so I must have done something right...
I would appreciate constructive criticism before posting it. I was an honors English student and have had jobs that require extensive writing, so I'm fairly confident that my grammar and spelling are correct. Experience has taught me that a good editor can greatly improve my writing.
I'm hoping for help with the story's flow. I like what I have but would like feedback on where it works and where it doesn't work. It makes sense to me, but then, I wrote it. I tend to have problems properly modifying pronouns; I know what I mean but my reader sometimes struggles. I also have a few sentences that I really don't like, but I haven't come up with anything better.
I plan to post under Non-consensual/Reluctance, but this story could also go under Gay Male or First Time. Anyone out there interested? Any gay editors looking for a challenge?
I would appreciate constructive criticism before posting it. I was an honors English student and have had jobs that require extensive writing, so I'm fairly confident that my grammar and spelling are correct. Experience has taught me that a good editor can greatly improve my writing.
I'm hoping for help with the story's flow. I like what I have but would like feedback on where it works and where it doesn't work. It makes sense to me, but then, I wrote it. I tend to have problems properly modifying pronouns; I know what I mean but my reader sometimes struggles. I also have a few sentences that I really don't like, but I haven't come up with anything better.
I plan to post under Non-consensual/Reluctance, but this story could also go under Gay Male or First Time. Anyone out there interested? Any gay editors looking for a challenge?
