beachlovers1998
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- Nov 6, 2007
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Hello everyone -
I am in the process of writing my second story (the first has been submitted and waiting for approval). I worked with an editor on that one and found it very helpful.
I would once again like to work with an editor - preferably female, so she give provide a female perspective, I am male. I am looking for grammar, especially dialogs which I have in this story and is new to me. Help with structure, wording and ideas to make the story better are always welcomed.
The story I am writing about is in the exhibitionism/voyeur category and about a couple that goes to key west and watch and are watched by another couple.
I am about 2/3 of the way complete on this one. With anticipating being complete over the weekend.
Thanks
I am in the process of writing my second story (the first has been submitted and waiting for approval). I worked with an editor on that one and found it very helpful.
I would once again like to work with an editor - preferably female, so she give provide a female perspective, I am male. I am looking for grammar, especially dialogs which I have in this story and is new to me. Help with structure, wording and ideas to make the story better are always welcomed.
The story I am writing about is in the exhibitionism/voyeur category and about a couple that goes to key west and watch and are watched by another couple.
I am about 2/3 of the way complete on this one. With anticipating being complete over the weekend.
Thanks