oh_lovebird_raunch
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First time submitter looking for an editor!
Hello!
(I hope that I am approaching this correctly.
)
This will be my (hopeful) first foray into Literotica. I am looking for someone to read and advise a two chapter story (with a combination of 4,357 words) about an eighteen year old girl and her Literature teacher. Lolita-esque (but within the age of concent
) It's starting off an more of a voyuristic masturbation tale at the moment, but I am hoping for it to become something on a non concentual/reluctance story in the future if it's good enough for submission.
I am currently studying Literature, but I sometimes worry that I get a little flowery with my language and that it may divert from the core of the tale. Also, I haven't ever relaly written much in terms of 'sex scenes' so any pointers would be marvelous! Opinion would be greatly appreciated from anyone who is willing to give it a go. I really want to grow as a writer.
Thankyou!
oh_lovebird x
Hello!
(I hope that I am approaching this correctly.
)This will be my (hopeful) first foray into Literotica. I am looking for someone to read and advise a two chapter story (with a combination of 4,357 words) about an eighteen year old girl and her Literature teacher. Lolita-esque (but within the age of concent
) It's starting off an more of a voyuristic masturbation tale at the moment, but I am hoping for it to become something on a non concentual/reluctance story in the future if it's good enough for submission. I am currently studying Literature, but I sometimes worry that I get a little flowery with my language and that it may divert from the core of the tale. Also, I haven't ever relaly written much in terms of 'sex scenes' so any pointers would be marvelous! Opinion would be greatly appreciated from anyone who is willing to give it a go. I really want to grow as a writer.
Thankyou!
oh_lovebird x
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