looking for an editor . . .

[daj8577]

Hey there,
I'm looking for an editor, or even just some general feed back on my serial novel "Seeking Twilight" posted on Lit. It's a non-erotic murder mystery thriller about two serial killers, one stalking the other, and the people trying to catch them. Plenty of twists and turns. I'm really mainly looking for feedback on atmosphere, continuity, and style. Please let me know what you think.
Thanx.

here are the links
chapter 1: http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=216420
chapter 2: http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=216424
chapter 3: http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=222810