I recently finished a short story. It's approx. 1500 words. I have two versions and I would like someone to take a look at them.
I am also working on a couple other stories. Both will probably be quite lengthy. One of them is currently sitting at about 85k words. But I think it can be broken down into more manageable sections.
My stories usually have an incest undertone and while it is not always consensual it is always adult. By non-consensual I mean that one or both of the people don't know that they are related.
I am always open to suggestions for story, character development and other constructive criticism.
I faithfully use spell check and really try and get my punctuation, tenses and voices correct. But, suggestions there will also be appreciated.
The long story that I am presently working on is a FFM poly triad. There is quite a bit of ff sex and some mm sex along with adult sibling incest. One of the females and the male in the poly group are active duty military which is another twist.
Thank you...
I am also working on a couple other stories. Both will probably be quite lengthy. One of them is currently sitting at about 85k words. But I think it can be broken down into more manageable sections.
My stories usually have an incest undertone and while it is not always consensual it is always adult. By non-consensual I mean that one or both of the people don't know that they are related.
I am always open to suggestions for story, character development and other constructive criticism.
I faithfully use spell check and really try and get my punctuation, tenses and voices correct. But, suggestions there will also be appreciated.
The long story that I am presently working on is a FFM poly triad. There is quite a bit of ff sex and some mm sex along with adult sibling incest. One of the females and the male in the poly group are active duty military which is another twist.
Thank you...
