Lord Naraku
Experienced
- Joined
- Mar 22, 2004
- Posts
- 79
Greetings. I tried to contact a vol. editor but something must have went wrong somewhere. Anyway I'd really like to get the story edited, since I have already started on the second chapter of this story. I'm dislexic, so my writing skills are poor. I think the story mostly needs to be checked for grammar and structure. It is an erotica coupling with no anal. I would also like some feedback on the story as well. If you've gotten this far thanks for your time and attention.