Looking for an editor or just for feedback

[Guest]

I'm nearing completion on my first submission, and I'm having a tough time getting a response back from any of the VE's.

I'm looking for feedback or minor editing (most of the rough stuff is done... I think). It's a longer story, about 13,000 words, which hopefully won't scare you off.

Specifically, the story would fall under the transsexual catagory, though I really am trying to establish the beats of a loving relationship before getting to the nasty sex. I'm not terribly happy with my time transitions and a few things of that nature, but any and all feedback would be appreciated.

Anyone willing to take a look just drop me a line on my email or reply here. Thanks a ton.

 

[ravar]

willing to look

I would be willing to take a look and help if at all possible. I have only just now submitted my name as editor.

 

[Guest]

I would be willing to take a look and help if at all possible. I have only just now submitted my name as editor.

I got a few responses in private that I took people up on already, but thanks for the offer Ravar. I'm hoping to submit within the next few days.