Looking for an editor for the first part of a story

[Violet_Pyre]

Hi, I'm looking for an editor for the first part of a story. I've posted on the site once before, just a short 800 word scene, and got some valuable feedback. After a bit of a break over Christmas I've now completed a 4100 word chapter of a story and I'd love somebody to check it over before I post/continue it please. Other than my short scene, I haven't written creatively for many years, and I'm not particularly confident about my grammar and flow, especially when using speech. I'd like some feedback and advice regarding that, and any other feedback you may be able to give. The story will be posted in Erotic Couplings. It's written in UK English. Please let me know if there's any other info you need to consider editing for me. Thanks

 

[Todger65]

Hi, I'm looking for an editor for the first part of a story. I've posted on the site once before, just a short 800 word scene, and got some valuable feedback. After a bit of a break over Christmas I've now completed a 4100 word chapter of a story and I'd love somebody to check it over before I post/continue it please. Other than my short scene, I haven't written creatively for many years, and I'm not particularly confident about my grammar and flow, especially when using speech. I'd like some feedback and advice regarding that, and any other feedback you may be able to give. The story will be posted in Erotic Couplings. It's written in UK English. Please let me know if there's any other info you need to consider editing for me. Thanks

I could give it a once over subject to the following:-

I won't touch copy with the following: rape, drugs, non-con, heavy BDSM, scat or piss, not keen on gay male or Trans, but otherwise most else goes.

I prefer msWord, but have other software too.

 

[Violet_Pyre]

Update:
Thank you for the offers of help that I received, both as PMs and by replying to my thread. I have now sent my story to a kind volunteer

Thanks again!