Looking for an editor for mff story with a little bit of fetish

[cartepostale]

Hi there. I'm looking for an editor for my story. The following things are included:

MF sex
MMF sex
A woman in a tennis skirt
Lingerie
Woman urinates while male watches

I know that I need help with my grammar and puctuation, but am also open to constructive criticism in any other area an editor might be able to offer.

Thanks

Mark
cartepostale@hotmail.co.uk

 

[KinkyRascal]

Happy to Help.

Happy to help just send your story along.