Looking for an editor for Holiday story

[Inkhorn]

I've got a bit of flash that could do with a second set of eyes to edit it. I wrote it a while ago, but I need to clean it up for the upcoming challenge.

Catergory: Non-Erotic
Genre: Historical Fiction
Word Count: Approx 1700 (including author's notes)
Summary: In December of 1916, a little boy tries to connect with his aging grandfather.

Any and all help is appreciated!

- Ink

 

[Inkhorn]

Mission accomplished.