Hi,
I'm putting the finishing touches on the final chapter of my North Star series and am looking for an editor. I'd really appreciate your thoughts on grammar and syntax mostly (making sure things make sense and aren't too wordy). But if you want to offer thoughts on structure, pace, or anything else I would appreciate that too.
Currently the final chapter is about 7500 words. The others are about 6500.
Chapter 1 (didn't use an editor for this one): https://www.literotica.com/s/north-star
Chapter 2: https://www.literotica.com/s/north-star-ch-02
Chapter 3: https://www.literotica.com/s/north-star-ch-03
It's been about 3 years between the the last couple chapters. I experimented a lot with this story. I do this mostly as a hobby so i'm having fun writing and exploring my voice.
Take a look! I hope you enjoy it and want to help me end this story well!
Rem
I'm putting the finishing touches on the final chapter of my North Star series and am looking for an editor. I'd really appreciate your thoughts on grammar and syntax mostly (making sure things make sense and aren't too wordy). But if you want to offer thoughts on structure, pace, or anything else I would appreciate that too.
Currently the final chapter is about 7500 words. The others are about 6500.
Chapter 1 (didn't use an editor for this one): https://www.literotica.com/s/north-star
Chapter 2: https://www.literotica.com/s/north-star-ch-02
Chapter 3: https://www.literotica.com/s/north-star-ch-03
It's been about 3 years between the the last couple chapters. I experimented a lot with this story. I do this mostly as a hobby so i'm having fun writing and exploring my voice.
Take a look! I hope you enjoy it and want to help me end this story well!
Rem
