Looking for an editor for 'Buying my sister a new bikini'

dirty_hankey

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Originally Snooper offered his help, but he is out of town until september. I will post three parts of the story I have already written to aid my search for an editor who will enjoy helping me. Please email me via this board if you are interested. I am also contacting editors from the editor list with compatible erotic interests.
 
Buying my sister a new bikini: Growing intimacy

Buying my sister a new bikini: Growing intimacy
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In the summer of '96 I was glad to be back home. College life was tiring. I failed half of my classes, I couldn't get laid and since 'the incident' I wasn't invited to parties anymore and lost most of my college friends. The friends I still had were total losers. Even bigger losers than I was, if that is possible.

But in my home town I was still loved. My old friends were happy to take me out to party 'for old times sake'. My family was laughing at every joke I made. They were really thrilled the comedian of the family was back. And last but not least, my sister was more affectionate than ever. Susan had truly missed me. It was actually a bit suffocating in a good way how she showered her 20-year old brother with love.

Susan was a lovely 18 year old voluptuous (in the original sense of the word) woman currently working as a cleaning lady at the local day care center. She totally fucked up her education to the desperation of my parents. Most of our childhood we spend fighting and pestering each other, but because I was her greatest support during her troubled teen years we grew closer. We still had lots of stupid little fights over stupid little things but we were forgiving instead of vengeful.

Part of me must admit I was more forgiving because she had become a super hot babe. She has what they call a pear-shaped body, wide hips, a juicy butt and a slender upper body complemented with two large, round almost symmetrical breasts. Her legs were long and muscular. Apart from a few scars, they were really sexy. Actually those scars added character. They reminded me she was a tough woman.

Her face wasn't super model like but if she was happy or up to no good she looked delightful. Her pretty green eyes would light up whenever she smiled. Her lips didn't need any lipstick, they were colored a glowing red by mother nature herself. Her dark blond hair was long and wavy, needing a lot of attention. My sister knew being beautiful meant enduring some pain and discomfort. We men have it easy. But I sure as hell appreciate the effort women put in looking attractive.

I've seen her in the nude almost daily during our teens. We have only one bathroom and we didn't mind sharing it. She only claimed her privacy one week of the month. I fully respected that, not in the least because she would be extremely cranky that time of the month.... I would be tiptoeing around her and still be shouted at. In the early days I would be shouting back but I later learned to just let her cool down.

There was never any sexual tension when we saw each other in the nude. I can't even remember having wood around her. I had an erection at least four times a day, so seeing my sister naked just didn't do it for me. But I knew a beautiful woman when I saw one. Simple as that. I often thought about photographing her naked self before gravity would win the battle over her near perfect breasts or her firm ass. Just to preserve it for mankind. Not for my personal pleasure. Really, I mean it. I'm not a perv....

I hadn't really spend time with my sister and parents since Christmas. After the fighting stopped over my college education gone awry we acted as a happy family again. The first week I was the only one home all day enjoying my summer break. Susan would have a two week break and my parents only a one week break from work.

The first week I spend in bed, on the beach or with my good old friends. I also spanked the monkey a few times... a day. With no one home I could watch porn, read erotic stories or fantasize about girls I saw at the beach without the fear of my roommate hearing me moan while I jerked off. I knew exactly when I had the house for myself.

So Wednesday I was quite surprised when my sister came home early... while I was upstairs at my computer watching dirty movies and stroking my average but in my humble opinion gorgeous circumcised cock.

"Richard! I'm home," sang Susan while she walked up the stairs.

Dammit! I had no time to slip into some clothes, close the porn on my computer and hide the Vaseline all at the same time.

"Just a minute," I shouted looking down on my glistening pounding erection.

Quickly I jumped into a boxer shorts and T-shirt and threw the jar of Vaseline into a corner. Susan walked into the room. On my computer screen an extremely busty white woman was titty fucked by a extremely large negro cock. My head turned red of embarrassment. With shaking hands I grabbed the mouse in an attempt to close the media player. I failed to click the cross twice, but my third attempt was successful.

"Sorry, I didn't want you to see this," I said looking away.

"It's okay. I watch porn myself you know," Susan totally flabbergasted me.

"I'm sorry," I repeated.

"Were you....??", Susan asked hinting at the outlines of my erection, not so well hidden in my shorts.

I couldn't form a coherent response. It must have sound something like, "Ugh, ya know, uuuhmmm...."

"That is some hot sex they are having," Susan gazed entranced at the screen.

"Yes, she looks like she is really enjoying it," finally I mustered a full response. I was calming down a bit.

"Well, I guess I will tell you about my day another time. You just go right away when I've left your room. It's normal you know," Susan said while she turned around.

"I'm not in the mood anymore. Just tell me about your day and why it was so short," I said while I felt my dick softening and my heart rate go down.

Apparently she couldn't stand the heat that day and fainted during work. She was sent home by her concerned boss.

"You've probably forgot to drink and eat enough like you always forget," I said with a strict voice looking into her eyes, "You should take better care of yourself!"

I gave her a hug feeling her heavy breasts pressing against my chest.

"You're such a sweet big brother. I'm so glad you're home," Susan whispered in my ear.

We prolonged our embrace longer than usual.

"I'm glad too. Lets do something together the rest of the afternoon. Wanna go for a drink at the square?" I suggested.

"No, I fainted an hour ago remember. I would just like a cup of tea right here at home," my sister replied.

"I will join you down stairs right after I finished jerking off. You need some milk?" I was feeling comfortable again so I just blurted this out.

"You have such a twisted sense of humor. I bet you have twisted, perverted thoughts all the time," Susan said with a naughty smile.

"A dirty mind is a joy forever!"

I did not masturbate after that. In fact I made my sister tea. We both picked up a book to read and took a seat in our garden enjoying the sun.

After a few minutes outside my sister said, "I'm going to change into a bikini, the sun is lovely today. Summer break came right on time."

After we both changed into our swimwear I met her outside again. She wore a black bikini. The top piece did a lousy job of containing her breasts. They jiggled, but amazingly they didn't droop a bit. My sisters boobs, defying gravity since she was sixteen... We went back to our reading. While she turned to her chair I had a great view of her ass. Was it my imagination or did she shake it a little before sitting down? I tried to concentrate on the detective novel I was reading to no avail. I couldn't help myself from looking at my sisters body. Her skin was sweaty and silky, I wanted to lick it. I did not have a good view of her boobs because of the way she held her book.

Aware of my stares she put the book away and said, "Like what you see?".

I nodded, blushing a bit.

"Don't you have a girl friend in college?"

I responded, "No, they're all stuck up bitches."

She gave me a vile look and said, "You're only calling them bitches because you ain't getting any. You jerk off."

Ouch.. That hurt. Why did she turn evil on me now.

"I betcha still a virgin," she whispered.

"I'm not! I lost my virginity years ago," I said.

That was a half-truth really.

"Well tell me about it."
 
Buying my sister a new bikini: Back for more

Buying my sister a new bikini: Back for more
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I lay on my bed dazzled by this day's events. I was pondering about the consequences of fucking my sister. It could never last. The people around us would never approve of such a thing. Then there was the question if it was love or lust mixed with brotherly love. How could one know the difference? I can't remember experiencing something that felt this good. I came to a conclusion. We could continue as long as we were honest to each other and secretive to every one else.

Because the turmoil in my head had ended I started to day dream about our adventure in the changing room. I envisioned my sister's body. I gently squeezed the air imagining I was feeling her boobs. I bucked my pelvis as if I was pounding my dick into her lovely pussy. Within minutes I was rock hard and desperate for some relief.

I started looking for the jar of Vaseline I had thrown in a corner in panic the day before. Since I discovered how much better it was compared to my raw hands I never wanked without. But I couldn't find the jar beneath the piles of junk I had in my room.

Maybe my sister is horny too! I put on my boxers and a t-shirt. As quietly as possible I opened my the door of my room, crossed the hall and gently knocked on my sisters door.

"Susan are you awake?" I whispered at the door.

"You can come in," my sister replied in normal speaking voice.

So I entered her room and knelt before her bed. The only light in the room was the small bed room lamp aimed at the wall behind her. It illuminated my sisters contours as she lay there on her side covered by the sheets. I saw her smiling at me. While her eyelashes were highlighted by the aforementioned light,her eyes where slightly hidden in the shadows. She extended her hand to me. I grabbed it and we started playing with each others fingers. Intertwining them and repositioning our hands. Then I gave her hand a little kiss.

"Were you thinking about us?" I asked giving my best puppy look.

"Richard. It's just not right."

"No one has to know."

"Mom and Dad will notice."

"People can have affairs for years without their spouses knowing it."

Susan was looking into my eyes with a straight face. I felt really nervous. Is she about to reject me? Not without a fight! I began kissing her arm moving closer to her face.

"Us having sex will lead to nothing but trouble and you know it," said Susan without any real conviction.

"I think you are worth the trouble," I responded.

I leaned in. She closed her eyes anticipating a kiss on her mouth. Accepting this as a victory I eagerly pressed my lips onto her lips. She trembled beneath me. While my heart went nuts I slowly pressed my tongue into her mouth where it met hers. While we lost ourselves in the sweetest french kiss I ever had, she started pathetic little attempts at pushing me away. I didn't even move a bit. She had no power in her arms. I was sucking out all her energy to resist me. I explored every bit of her wet creamy little mouth and her big soft sweet lips. When we finally released we were both breathing heavily.

"I want to fuck you," I said.

"I'm not ready yet."

"How do you mean? You're probably oozing down there," I said slightly irritated. My cock was completely erect and throbbing like hell. I was painfully aroused. I guess my dick was purple of excitement. Why is she teasing me like this!

"I need a little foreplay you know."

"Well I need to cum real bad. Could I titty fuck you? Ever done that? I would really love to titty fuck you," I said with a hoarse excited voice.

"God you are dirty! I love that," she said while pulling down the sheets. I immediately started pulling up her night gown while I climbed onto the bed on top of her. Her bed creaked. As I sat on my knees I looked down at her pretty face. It was even more beautiful than normal because I could read the horniness in her eyes and the way she licked her lips.

"Hush! We might wake them," Susan noticed.

"I will be quiet. Don't you worry," I said.

My sister aided me and pulled her night gown over her head. I went straight for her big creamy breasts. I was trying to hold as much of her breasts as I could in each hand. Then I started rubbing her nipples with my index fingers. I felt them growing under my caress. Bending down I licked her right and then her left nipple still mauling her tits. All the while my dick was grinding on her belly and below through the soft fabric of my boxer.

"Oh Richard! That feels good," Susan purred.

It was time I pulled down my boxer to release the beast within. I moved it close to her face. My sister immediately grabbed it at the base and took a closer look. It was rock hard and even a bit purple of excitement. A few veins were clearly visible, throbbing like mad. I felt her breath on my sensitive cock-head. She began to kiss it, sending shivers all through my body.

"Lick it. Make it wet. I want to slide it between your beautiful breasts."

Susan complied. She licked and stroked my cock up and down from every reachable angle. She really got into it, closing her eyes and using as much saliva as she could. After I thought it was wet enough I shifted my weight and squeezed her breasts together forming a perfect fuck tunnel. Susan put her hands on mine. She looked into my eyes with anticipation.

Slowly I pushed my cock between her tits. They almost completely enveloped my member, except for its head sticking out. My sister tilted her head and stuck out her tongue reaching for my cock. I pushed upwards to let her have another taste. Then I began moving my hips. My cock was sliding up and down between my sisters cleavage. I increased my tempo until my cock slipped. I removed my hands leaving her tits bouncing.

My sister took over. She hold her boobs ready for some more tit fucking. She crossed her fingers above her chest to prevent me from slipping. I guided my dick back into her cleavage. Now I really got into it. It was like a rodeo ride. God she is beautiful! My lord this feels good! My promise to be quiet was forgotten. The bed was creaking like mad. Me and my sister were moaning and breathing like a pack of wolves in a midnight orgy. I felt my cum boiling inside my organ.

"I'm going to blow my load. Could you jerk it fast for me?" I asked with some desperation in my voice.

"I want to see you come. I want to see it shooting all over my tits and face," said Susan while grabbing my dick and violently jerking it.

That took me over the edge. The first shot of sperm hit her left cheek and ended up into her hair. My sister blinked her eyes but smiled a wide smile. The second shot hit her chin, lips and nose. Then the rest of my load just oozed down onto her chest. I trembled in a blissful orgasm. My sister didn't stop jerking me but slowed down extending my bliss. The sight of my sister covered in my cum was a picture I would never forget. The smell of my sperm was filling my nostrils. Such a mess! She started to giggle.

"You shoot so much!" said Susan in amazement.

Then she dipped her finger in the poodle of cum on her chest and took a taste. She closed her eyes and pretended to really enjoy it. She sucked her finger in as much as she could and showed her tongue while she removed it.

"Could you clean me up? I have tissues here on my night stand."

We were interrupted by the sound of some one climbing the stairs. Shit! We woke my parents! In a rush of panic I jumped under the bed. Susan wiped the cum of her face with her night gown and pulled up the sheets. She turned of the light. A knock on the door. It was mom.

"Are you alright dear?" said my mothers concerned voice on the other side of the door.

"I am alright mom. I just had a bad dream. I'm okay now! You can go back to sleep," my sister said with a faked sleepy voice.

"Boy, she can act," I thought to myself.

"Maybe you want to talk about it?" asked mom.

"No, I just want to sleep. But thanks for your concern."

Finally my mom left with a "Goodnight dear."

After I heard the door close downstairs I slowly moved from under the bed. I gestured Susan to make some room for me on her bed. Without saying anything I
climbed next to her facing her while we both lied on our sides.

"That was close," whispered Susan, "Now I need to sneak out this dirty laundry before mom finds out."

"I probably should wait a little before I move back to my room," I said far from disappointed.

My sister turned around and asked, "could you spoon me? I like to be hold."

I nestled myself as close as possible to my sisters body. My soft dick lay between the crack of her ass. My arms were wrapped around her waist. My hands were rubbing her belly. I inhaled deeply, taking in as much of her odour. It mixed nicely with the remaining smell of my sperm. I saw her hands travelling to her pussy. She began touching herself. I planted a long and soft kiss into her neck.

I whispered into her ear, "Do you need some help with that?"

She groaned in agreement.
 
Buying my sister a new bikini: Susan's turn

Buying my sister a new bikini: Susan's turn
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Slowly I moved my left hand from my sister's belly to her mouth. During the way up I fondled with her navel, the base of her breast, her nipples and her neck. As soon as I reached her lips, Susan opened her mouth. She slobbered on my fingers making them drip with saliva.

My sister was stroking her pussy. She was panting and squirming against my groin. My flaccid dick was wet and kinda hurting from the titty fucking I did earlier. Nevertheless it was coming back to life.

I moved my left hand back down. This time I went straight for her pussy. Pushing my sisters hand aside, I began exploring her pussy lips, taking special care of her enlarged clit. Her pussy felt wet and warm, almost hot. Susan twisted and bucked against my fingers letting out excited moans. She put her hand on mine guiding my movements, controlling the pace.

"We must be quiet. Mom might check on you again," I whispered in my sisters ear.

I gave her ear lobe a little lick. She moved her ear away, not expecting it.

"Just put your hand on my mouth if I'm too loud."

So I moved my right hand to her mouth gently covering it. Her breath was tingling my palm. It was really sensual as I felt how her breathing reacted to my touch. I began grinding into the crack of her ass.

"I think you have really pretty ears. Do you like it if I suck your ear lobes?" I asked with the softest of voice.

"Just be gentle. It is really sensitive. And don't stop stroking me!" said Susan between her moans and heavy breathing.

Quickly I moved all her hair out of the way with my mouth. The hair stuck to my lips so I needed a little aid from my right hand. Next I started gently kissing and sucking her ear lobe. I don't know why, but I really love kissing and sucking a woman's ear lobe. Maybe because it reminds me a little of a giant clit. I like my ear lobes sucked too, but the girls I have made out with in my live rarely sucked it long enough for my taste. But I digress. As I was stroking my sister's wet cunt and caressing her ear lobe, I really started humping her ass without violating it.

Somehow I grew tired of the soft love making and started to speed up the pace of humping and stroking my sister's cunt. I insert two fingers into her love tunnel. With force and rigour I worked her pussy like a man possessed.

"Slow down. It's too much," cried my sister.

But I ignored her and covered her mouth with force.

"I want you to come. Come for me my sweet sister. Feel my love for you," I said barely audible as I was almost out of breath.

A surge of pain hit me as my sister bit my hand. She trembled and shook her whole body as an orgasm washed all over her. Her cries and screams were stifled by my aching hand. My fingers in her pussy were milked and squeezed by her cunt.

"Put it in me. Put it in me. Put your cock in me NOW!" pleaded my sister.

I never knew a woman could be so desperate for cock until that night. Apparently having an overwhelming orgasm did the trick for Susan. I lowered my whole body as I shoved my cock into her pussy.

"Just keep it there. I love how your cock fills me," said my Sister with a hoarse voice sounding almost dreamy.

Just a few minutes later I noticed Susan fell asleep with my dick still inside of her. I pulled out and tried not to wake her as I got up. I tip-toed to my own room feeling really satisfied. I waned of in a deep sleep.
 
Looking for an editor?

dirty_hankey said:
Originally Snooper offered his help, but he is out of town until september. I will post three parts of the story I have already written to aid my search for an editor who will enjoy helping me. Please email me via this board if you are interested. I am also contacting editors from the editor list with compatible erotic interests.

Hi dirty_hankey,
I'm interested and will be free this weekend. Can you send me your story as a Word Attachment?
My address :tallguy220@hotmail.com

Cheers, tg (Voluntary Editor) :nana:
 
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