I’m looking for an editor for an 18,000 word story that involves light BDSM (spanking, handcuffs, domination), as well as elements of reluctance/persuasion. I wouldn’t call any of it overly hardcore.
The plot involves a repressed, female therapist who becomes obsessed with a male patients fantasies and rediscovers her lost sexuality.
I’ve published two short story’s here already. They can be viewed here: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4729890&page=submissions
The story titled, “The owning of Lee Adams chapter two” is incorporated into my new story, as the fantasy portion.
I’ve used Grammmarly to correct most of the obvious grammatical and spelling errors, but I’m sure an experienced editor will find some I’ve missed. (Please note, my previous stories were submitted before I discovered Grammarly). Aside from correcting any grammatical errors, I’m looking for feedback on how I can make my story better, more interesting and clearer. Any constructive feedback will be greatly appreciated.
I use google docs.
The plot involves a repressed, female therapist who becomes obsessed with a male patients fantasies and rediscovers her lost sexuality.
I’ve published two short story’s here already. They can be viewed here: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4729890&page=submissions
The story titled, “The owning of Lee Adams chapter two” is incorporated into my new story, as the fantasy portion.
I’ve used Grammmarly to correct most of the obvious grammatical and spelling errors, but I’m sure an experienced editor will find some I’ve missed. (Please note, my previous stories were submitted before I discovered Grammarly). Aside from correcting any grammatical errors, I’m looking for feedback on how I can make my story better, more interesting and clearer. Any constructive feedback will be greatly appreciated.
I use google docs.
