Looking for an editor for a Warcraft/Breast Expansion story

[LenaTrueshield]

You can look through my profile for the first chapter. I've generally received good comments from people, but since English isn't my native tongue, I'm afraid of making mistakes and using the wrong words sometimes. Also, the first chapter of my story had a pretty low rating (3.8) so I'm looking at ways I can improve my storytelling.

Thank you in advance.

 

[sr71plt]

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2765359&page=submissions

 

[_Lynn_]

You can look through my profile for the first chapter. I've generally received good comments from people, but since English isn't my native tongue, I'm afraid of making mistakes and using the wrong words sometimes. Also, the first chapter of my story had a pretty low rating (3.8) so I'm looking at ways I can improve my storytelling.

Thank you in advance.

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[LenaTrueshield]

Be sure to turn on Private Messages.
* To switch on your Private Messages, go to User CP (top left of this page), click on Edit Options (in the left hand column), and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the box titled Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators is NOT ticked. Finally, click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

Should be on now. My bad!