Sadisticurges
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Hello,
I have the first chapter of a series ready, about 4k words at present. I am looking an editor to provide feedback regarding grammar, spelling, plot holes and general flow. All comments appreciated
Turnaround of 1-2 weeks is totally fine.
Themes will be: BDSM, CNC, non-con, anal, blackmail, coercion and torture, though there will aslo be romantic parts and vanilla sex. A big inspiration was Hispet21's series a Rebellious slave.
The first part of the story revolves around a married man who likes to coerce/blackmail susceptible women into sex and general debauchery and his relationship to the main protagonist, an instagram starlet. She is starting out and desperate for attention, taking a financial risk to start her ascent to mainstream fame. However because of the societal impact of COVID she is forced to make a deal with devil. Later parts of the story will follow her battle with the married couple and eventual continent spannig tale ending in another showdown with said couple at the end. The main story arc will focus on her development.
Thanks for the reading Don't hesitate to send a PM, I will gladly send a copy for a no-strings evaluation, I hold no grudges if its not for you.
I have the first chapter of a series ready, about 4k words at present. I am looking an editor to provide feedback regarding grammar, spelling, plot holes and general flow. All comments appreciated
Turnaround of 1-2 weeks is totally fine.Themes will be: BDSM, CNC, non-con, anal, blackmail, coercion and torture, though there will aslo be romantic parts and vanilla sex. A big inspiration was Hispet21's series a Rebellious slave.
The first part of the story revolves around a married man who likes to coerce/blackmail susceptible women into sex and general debauchery and his relationship to the main protagonist, an instagram starlet. She is starting out and desperate for attention, taking a financial risk to start her ascent to mainstream fame. However because of the societal impact of COVID she is forced to make a deal with devil. Later parts of the story will follow her battle with the married couple and eventual continent spannig tale ending in another showdown with said couple at the end. The main story arc will focus on her development.
Thanks for the reading
Don't hesitate to send a PM, I will gladly send a copy for a no-strings evaluation, I hold no grudges if its not for you.
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