Looking for an editor, 30k words for Part 1 of a longer story

[alamoana]

The story is posted, but will need editing:

https://www.literotica.com/s/and-the-sun-set-east-pt-01

BDSM/noncon

Thank you in advance,
Ala Moana

 

[Peterdeen14]

I would be glad to offer my services, but as the story has not yet been approved I'm not able to view the link. If you could post a brief synopsis and genre I could give you a more solid answer.

-Peter