Looking for advice on my writing

[lexiexstacy]

I have several writers blogs set up and working on getting my writing skills sharpened for a book that I am wanting to work on. Please check out the writings and let me know if you have some advice or opinions on the writing.
http://jessshortstory.quora.com/
or
http://jessshortstories.blogspot.com/
Both are just journal websites that I have uploaded some of my work samples on and just looking for some other writers opinions.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

I have several writers blogs set up and working on getting my writing skills sharpened for a book that I am wanting to work on. Please check out the writings and let me know if you have some advice or opinions on the writing.
http://jessshortstory.quora.com/
or
http://jessshortstories.blogspot.com/
Both are just journal websites that I have uploaded some of my work samples on and just looking for some other writers opinions.

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