Looking for a woman's perspective and editor

[LancerCrownCT]

I am a 42 y.o. male who is making the best of teaching from home during this Covid-19 pandemic. I have been reading Literotica for decades enjoying erotic coupling, group sex, mature, and occasionally other subject matter. I decided to try my hand at writing for the first time. I have a story about rescuing a college student while hiking at Sleeping Giant State Park in Connecticut. This story is based on real life events but develops in the way I imagine it could have if I had been forward enough to pursue the girl. This is the first of what could be a multi-chapter story if it is well received by the Literotica community. Please don't think that you are expected to edit more than this 5,500 word chapter. If you enjoy working on the story and we work well as writer and editor team, we can discuss ideas for moving forward.

I am specifically looking for a female editor who can make my writing enjoyable to both genders. I would also prefer someone who enjoys the outdoors. I have a few stories I have roughed out which are taken from real life experiences while hiking or camping. It would be helpful to have someone who can call me out on things that just don't make sense or help me spin the tale in a way that excites them. Lastly, and this is not a hard and fast rule, it would be great to find someone who lives near Connecticut and may have an understanding of the areas I mention in my story.

PM me if you are interested.