looking for a reader

[pointless]

because i'm not sure if my story makes sense. it's the third part of a series i'm writing and i don't want to fuck up the series with a part that makes no damned sense. it's lesbian yadayada. anyone who is interested should pm me before my brain melts.

 

[cantdog]

How long is it, then?

 

[pointless]

thirteen pages in size ten font, but it can be resized before i send it.

 

[cantdog]

Sounds not so bad. Look here, though, I don't have Word. Could you save it as *.rtf or *txt or something? Word is on my work computer, but I can't spend fifteen pages reading lesbian yadayada in the church office. Not all at once, if you get me.

RTF or TXT I can read here, tonight.

Gimme a clue, too. Do you think the plot makes no sense, or the motivations of the characters, or just what?

You can send it PM or use my e-mail, or anything. I'm not hard to reach.

 

[pointless]

txt is no problem. i don't even have word. just works.

and it's mainly motivation that i'm worried about. i'm not sure if i've given them enough reason to act the way they do.

 

[cantdog]

Good oh then. I PMed you the e-mail. I stand ready, and all that.

 

[pointless]

coolness.

 

[herecomestherain]

What a civiised place Lit is.

 

[NoJo]

it's lesbian yadayada.

That's my peccadillo right there. Not the lesbian, the yadayada.

 

[cantdog]

Those particular lesbians do a lot of yadayada, too. It took me back. Sometimes I think teenagers are a different subspecies or something.

 

[pointless]

i'm so confused. i think my brain has finally melted. dreaming about giving people dutch ovens just isn't right.

 

[cookiejar]

What a civiised place Lit is.

Go to the GB and see if you say that.