Storyfeller
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- Joined
- Dec 19, 2008
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In collaboration with a new writing partner I have recently produced a number of very short stories. They are little more than vignettes with little by way of character description and a minimum of plot.
This is not normally my style and it's being done purely as an experiment.
One of them is a portrayal of rather dark and raw lesbianism - but as neither of us has a feel for whether it accurately describes what goes through the female homosexual mind or whether it would actually appeal to that 'tendency', we're at a loss to know if it's any good.
Could I kindly ask for any volunteer from that 'community' to run their eye over it and give us an opinion? As I say, it is extremely brief and will not take long to read. I must ask for a genuine lesbian, please, and not one of the many on here who parade themselves as what they are not.
This is not asking for redaction or editing, merely reaction.
This is not normally my style and it's being done purely as an experiment.
One of them is a portrayal of rather dark and raw lesbianism - but as neither of us has a feel for whether it accurately describes what goes through the female homosexual mind or whether it would actually appeal to that 'tendency', we're at a loss to know if it's any good.
Could I kindly ask for any volunteer from that 'community' to run their eye over it and give us an opinion? As I say, it is extremely brief and will not take long to read. I must ask for a genuine lesbian, please, and not one of the many on here who parade themselves as what they are not.
This is not asking for redaction or editing, merely reaction.