dreamland_girl
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Looking for an experienced helpful editor to my first story of the first time story~~
Looking for an experienced helpful editor to my first story of the first time story~~
Here is the exerpt:
“What a beautifully pink little thing, my darling.” Said as she gently separating my labia apart with her long but delicately thin index and middle fingers. I just felt Dr.Concetta emit a warm breeze from her nose onto my vulva, “That’s a wonderful sieve shape hymen that our little baby girl own. Congratulation Mr.Regis, she is bona fide a gorgeous pure virgin baby girl.”
Dr.Concetta gave a teasing kiss on my already wet pussy. “Delicious...” , she stood up and tasted a bit of my watery secretion that left on her finger, “Mr.Regis, since her type of hymen, you might need a bit more lubricate so she won’t suffer too much when it’s broken.” She searched her medical box for a while and take out a lubricant, smearing it on my vulva, and the exposed penis of Mr.Regis.
Mr.Regis smiled and laid my two legs on his shoulder, buried his head on my belly, kissed and moved down. I just felt his warm tongue play around my vulva, and his beard sting on my skin, itchy but somewhat fun. This was so aroused me and make my vagina leaked out a lot watery liquid, and he just sucked on it diligently. Then, he hold my head with his big hand, waved his penis head on my vulva, teasing my clit, i can feel that is a massive meaty stick searching on my slit, like a lion ready to strike. I look him straightly, he looks so muscularly strong and so devoted. I wrapped my arms around his neck instinctly, feel his warm gasp on my neck. His penis just moved to my vaginal opening, and moved in a bit with the tip and touched to my sieve like hymen, make me nervously closed my eyes and sighed, “Baby, you look so fabulous, it’s my honor to take your virginity” he praised. He retreat a bit and pound to my virginal pussy again, and again, tried me many times, and keep tried, make me so excited and happy, suddenly, he pound it very hard and do not retreat again, directly move in very forcefully and continuously ,I just feel my vagina so ruptured and a great pain make me cry out, the adhesive part of pussy had being split opened, his massive thing just begin to fill my narrow pussy hole. This great impact divide my pussy very apart and even the hip felt so ruptured. He thrust inside me so strong, got deeper and deeper, pounded my womb so powerful. I’ve never feel that daring move against my body ever.”Now, baby, I have you~” Mr.Regis murmured when he pounded me that hard, added ”You will be officially named Estela in my company”
Looking for an experienced helpful editor to my first story of the first time story~~
Here is the exerpt:
“What a beautifully pink little thing, my darling.” Said as she gently separating my labia apart with her long but delicately thin index and middle fingers. I just felt Dr.Concetta emit a warm breeze from her nose onto my vulva, “That’s a wonderful sieve shape hymen that our little baby girl own. Congratulation Mr.Regis, she is bona fide a gorgeous pure virgin baby girl.”
Dr.Concetta gave a teasing kiss on my already wet pussy. “Delicious...” , she stood up and tasted a bit of my watery secretion that left on her finger, “Mr.Regis, since her type of hymen, you might need a bit more lubricate so she won’t suffer too much when it’s broken.” She searched her medical box for a while and take out a lubricant, smearing it on my vulva, and the exposed penis of Mr.Regis.
Mr.Regis smiled and laid my two legs on his shoulder, buried his head on my belly, kissed and moved down. I just felt his warm tongue play around my vulva, and his beard sting on my skin, itchy but somewhat fun. This was so aroused me and make my vagina leaked out a lot watery liquid, and he just sucked on it diligently. Then, he hold my head with his big hand, waved his penis head on my vulva, teasing my clit, i can feel that is a massive meaty stick searching on my slit, like a lion ready to strike. I look him straightly, he looks so muscularly strong and so devoted. I wrapped my arms around his neck instinctly, feel his warm gasp on my neck. His penis just moved to my vaginal opening, and moved in a bit with the tip and touched to my sieve like hymen, make me nervously closed my eyes and sighed, “Baby, you look so fabulous, it’s my honor to take your virginity” he praised. He retreat a bit and pound to my virginal pussy again, and again, tried me many times, and keep tried, make me so excited and happy, suddenly, he pound it very hard and do not retreat again, directly move in very forcefully and continuously ,I just feel my vagina so ruptured and a great pain make me cry out, the adhesive part of pussy had being split opened, his massive thing just begin to fill my narrow pussy hole. This great impact divide my pussy very apart and even the hip felt so ruptured. He thrust inside me so strong, got deeper and deeper, pounded my womb so powerful. I’ve never feel that daring move against my body ever.”Now, baby, I have you~” Mr.Regis murmured when he pounded me that hard, added ”You will be officially named Estela in my company”
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