Looking for a female writing partner to join me

amon_darknight

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Looking for a female writing partner to join me- CLOSED-

I was thinking of a thread to do and it would involve one woman and maybe down the line a few other people. So if anyone would like to write with me please do so.

Here is the thread basis-

Two students are going to a community collage and the woman works at a strip club to pay for tuition. Well the gentlemen just goes to school and is really a no body, a guy that is shy around the women, so he goes to strip clubs to be around girls.

Well I was thinking that the story would be based around the guy seeing this girl in the strip club and she turning him into a regular and not knowing that they go to school together, maybe he knows that she goes to the same collage, but keeps it to himself, just so things don’t get strange. But in the end I want these two to have a relationship, something like that.

Here is my char:

Lewis Tenlorn
5’7” 178lbs
brown eyes black hair messy top but cut short has a shaggy 5’oclock shadow beard usually
dresses in jeans and button up shirts and a black jacket

is shy around women, but has had a little experience with them. But is a out going type of person and is just a bit shy.


So I hope I can get a writer to join.
 
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This sounds like a cool thread! I'd like to join and play the stripper's role if you haven't got anyone yet. I'm about to go to sleep, but if I'm in, I'll edit this message tomorrow with a character writeup.
 
wow of course you got the part. I love your writing and am happy to know that you are interested. I only hope that I can keep up with your skill and talents, thanks for the joining.
 
Nina

Coolio!
Okay then; here's my character:

Nina Drake
5' 5" 110 lbs
Eyes: Green
Hair: Black and wavy, down to just below shoulders
Dresses according to the show she's putting on
Several tattoos (owl on ankle, barbed spiral on left shoulder, two entwined snakes on lower back above her hips)
Pierced ears, pierced nose, pierced navel; possibly more (wink!)

Nina's specialty at the strip club is the "dangerous goth chick," and although outside of the club she's softspoken and friendly, her tough attitude kicks in quick when she gets annoyed or feels threatened.

And that's that! Should we start a new thread to get the story going? Or just use this one and take it from here? Oh; and let me know if there's anything you'd like to see changed for Nina (less/more piercings, different hair color, etc.) and I'd be happy to adjust things in any direction. :)
 
We could just leave this here, but if you want we could start a new thread, don’t matter to me, just as long as I can be able to write with someone as talented as you, always thought about what it would be like to co write with someone as legendary as yourself.

Your character sounds great, just wondering about her other features, but I am sure you will write that in your post. Here is my first post, just let me know if you want me to move it.


Lewis Tenlorn

Lewis Tenlorn is sitting in his last class for the day and he cant wait till 6 hits the clock, there was nothing really exciting about Lewis’s life, he looks up to the ceiling and sighs. The teacher than looks around and dismisses the class and Lewis is first out the door as he heads to his car, taking a smoke out and lighting it up.

“I guess its time to go and get a beer or two and watch some beautiful girls dancing.”

He sighed again as he let out smoke and he headed to his car, along the way he looked over and saw a group of girls just hanging out and that had Lewis shaking his head, he didn’t know why he couldn’t become part of a group like that, but he just kept shaking his head and walking. He pulled out a flyer from his back pocket and he looked it over to see that a new strip club had opened, well its been opened for a few weeks now, but it offered a free lap dance and admission.

“Sweet titties, I think I will go there tonight.”

He opened the car door to his old beat up Shelby and he started it after a couple of tries.

“Why always me?”

He than drove off and headed to the club.

When he arrived he saw the place looked rather VIPish, but he shook his head, might as well try it out, he had money. He parked his car and he walked over to the door where he saw a bouncer, Lewis ran his hand though his hair as he had his ID in his hand and he straightened his glasses. He gave the half coupon to the bouncer and he walked on in to see a large stage and a up stairs and a room off to the back. He went to sit down and was approached by a cute looking waitress.

“I will just take a rum and coke with lime.”
Waitress: “Sure, that will be 7 even.”

Lewis handed her a 20 and she walked off to get his drink, there were girls everywhere, the place wasn’t that crowded, but it was still early, Lewis sat down at a table and watched the blonde woman dance on the stage. Lewis just looked around and smiled. His blue button up shirt was tucked out and a bit wrinkled and his black fitted jeans, he messed with is zippo as he saw the waitress come back.

Waitress: “Here is your drink and your change.”
Lewis: “Keep it.”

Lewis smiled at her and continued to watch the women walk around and offer them dances. Lewis never liked just being asked, he always liked to be talked to, he liked to be given a small sample and little tease, but he didn’t see any of that going on here.

“Just like the others.”
 
Nina

Nina felt her pulse quicken; she'd been dancing at this club since it had opened a few weeks ago, but the thrill, the delicious forbidden thrill of dancing had only built with each performance. Security was great at the club, and combined with the fact that it was expensive as hell to drink and eat there meant that you rarely, if ever, got the type of scary thugs she'd had to deal with at the last place. Dancing for tuition was a great way to avoid student loans, but it was even better when you didn't have to worry about the customers.

And then she heard the music start. The now familiar baseline was her cue.

As she stepped out onto the stage, the first thing that she noticed, as always, was the energy in the place. And as she moved out to the dance stage, she felt all that energy directing itself at her, into her. It was amazing!

Nina was in her full costume, that of a dangerous goth chick. Her black hair was tied into pigtails, and her makeup was dark and heavy, with an almost Egyptian motif. Her lipstick was glossy and red, and she ran her tongue over her teeth as she stepped up and began to dance. Her costume was of black leather, with dark lace stockings, fingerless lace gloves, and high leather boots with prodigious heels. She wore a short black mini-skirt that rode high on ther thighs, just above the upper rim of her stockings to show off about an inch of creamy white leg. Above the skirt she wore a black leather halter top, with thick shoulderstraps and a teasingly modest neckline that only alowed the top few inches of cleavage to show. A shining row of silver buttons rand down the front of both her miniskirt and her halter top, and as she began to dance and tease these buttons, she saw him sitting near the far end of the stage. Something... something seemed familiar about him. Had he been to the club before? She doubted it... but still. Intrigued, she began to work her way over to him, deciding he would be the focus of her attentions for the show to come.
 
Lewis sat there drinking beers as he heard the deep baseline and he looked up to see a new girl take to the stage, a full on gothed out girl, she was beautiful.

“Wow… that is true beauty.”

He spilled a little beer on his shirt, but didn’t seem to notice as he saw her make her way over to the end of the stage, he pulled out a wad of dollars and he throws five out to her. Her dark black hair and black eyeliner only made her look more alluring and mysterious, she had large breasts that filled that halter top and screamed to be freed and her nipples showed through the top and looked so delicious. Lewis shook his head and he smiled as he saw her look to him, her eyes captured him and seemed to be casting a spell on him as he was lost in her eyes.

“Beau..tiful…”

He threw a almost half of his dollar bills up on the stage, he has never thrown this much money before, but for some reason she had some sort of power over him. Again Lewis shook his head and took another large swig of beer, watching her.
 
Nina

When he stated throwing money on the stage, Nina knew she'd picked the right guy from the crowd. She drew closer to him, locking his gaze for a moment until she started undoing her leather top, button by button, starting from the bottom and working up. The music was slow and rhythmic, so she worked her body like a snake, coiling and twisting hypnotically until the final button came loose and she shrugged the haltertop away, revealing her large tits constrained in a black silk string bikinni top. The fabric barely covered her; a fair amount of flesh was visible on all sides of the twin black triangles. The gold ring dangling from her navel sparkled tantalizingly in the light of the club.

She turned around then, still writhing to the music. With only the thin strap of the bikinni top clinging to her back, two of her tattoos were clearly visible now; the barbed spiral on her left shoulder and the two entwined snakes coiled just above her waist in the small of her back. The thin black straps of her g-string arched up from under her miniskirt, riding a little bit higher on her hips than the skirt itself. Her back still turned to him, she undid the front of her skirt and opened it wide, rubbing it to the left and right over her ass as if she were drying it with a towell.

Finally, as the music began to pick up, she turned to face him again, dropping the miniskirt in his lap. Her g-string left very little to the imagination as she kneeled at the edge of the stage and leaned back, swaying her crotch at the man and inviting him to slip a bill or two under the hem.
 
Lewis was so entranced by her stripping and dancing, but it was more than that, her eyes had him lost in a harmony of sexual dreams. He saw her breasts jiggle with her movements and saw how they begged to be freed from there restraints, but when she saw her ass and the way she teased him with it, he almost creamed in his pants. This had to be the most beautiful stripper he has ever seen, he was so locked in her beauty that he didn’t even notice another stripper trying to ask him for a dance, she had her hands all over him, but Lewis just kept watching the one on the stage. He wanted to just jump on the stage, but he didn’t want to get thrown out, but she than swayed her crotch in front of his face very teasingly and he knew what she wanted, he took a twenty dollar bill and slipped it right under the cover of her pussy and he felt her folds for just that brief instant. He blushed a bit and he sat back down and chugged his beer.

“So beautiful…”
 
Nina

She wasn't sure... the club was loud with the sound of music and cheering patrons, but did this guy just say, "So beautiful..." as he slid a bill into the front of her thong? She sat up to face him, sneering at him in a sexy "did you just slip something into my panties?" sort of way to keep up her dangerous facade. She reached down to the front of her g-string and slid her fingers under the fabric, took hold of the bill, and then slid it up her body, sliding it up under the left cup of her leather bra.

A few more shakes and turns, and the song was drawing to an end. Nina slithered to her feet and writhed away from the still familiar customer, but before she slipped backstage, she turned to look into his eyes and threw him a wink.

Backstage, Nina retrieved the bill and saw that it was a twenty. NICE! She wasn't scheduled for any more stage performances that night, but the night was still young. If the guy would tip a twenty for a stage dance... what might he do for a lap dance?

The club had private booths in back for personal dances, but she wasn't sure the customer was into something like that. He seemed a little timid... best to take it easy for now and test his interests. To keep from scaring him off, she slipped on a few more clothes; a black t-shrit with a leering skull over the left breast and dark red miniskirt. She finished the look with some nice leather anklets, bracelets, and a belt, all studded with stainless steel spikes. She smirked in the mirror... fairly certain that these new additions made her more threatening than without, but then shrugged and headded out onto the club floor to seek the guy out to see, at least, if he wanted to buy her a drink.
 
Lewis was completely memorized as he saw this Angel dance on the stage, she was pure perfection, if that made any sense at all. But as the song ended she was gone and she left with a sexy wink, what did that mean, was there something more to come with that woman, I mean she would come out an offer lap dances right? He felt his heart quicken with anxiousness when he thought about her giving him a dance.

“Will that Angel be like the others and just ask or would she give him a sample and talk with him, I wonder?”

He hated the normal stripper that only asked for a dance and if you said no she would just walk off, he more liked the ones that showed interests in him, just to give him some mock humor that he was attractive, but that was another story. He felt a woman’s hand on his shoulder and he looked back to see the waitress bring him another beer, Lewis smiled and handed her his credit card.

“What was that last dancers name, and if bring her a drink from me I got a ten with your name on it.”

The waitress smiled.

Waitress: “Her name is beauty, she is the best dancer in the club and I do not give her name out unless she says its ok, just for safety reasons, but I will charge a drink to your card and start a tab for you if you wish.”
Lewis: “Thanks, and yes get her whatever she wants and tell her that I highly enjoyed her performance.”

The waitress looked across the floor and saw her and she smiled to Lewis.

Waitress: “Why don’t you tell her yourself and I will be back with her drink and your new beer since I see that you already chugged half of it. She is dangerous watch yourself.”

She smiled and walked away as she motioned for Nina to come over to this man, Lewis had on a bright smile as he saw that Angel approaching him, Lewis had a ten out for when the waitress came back and he never took his eyes off this dark haired Goddess, what was she going to do?
 
Nina

As Nina wound her way through the club floor, she made sure to sneer and roll her eyes at the men and women who called out to her, making a show of rejecting them in a way that almost made her seem like a predator stalking a ripe hunting ground for a specific type of victim. As she stalked, she caught the subtle signal from one of the waitresses (Tanya was her name, if Nina remembered right), and saw her give a slight nod of the head to where her target was sitting. She smiled, licked her lips, and circled in for the kill.

He saw her approaching him, and she let him know she saw him see her with a slight upturn of the corner of her ruby-red lips, almost a smile, but not quite. She slid up to the bar, taking a seat next to him and rested one arm on the wood countertop, causing the hem of her tshirt to ride up enough to expose more of her midriff, and the sparkling jade and gold ring in her navel. For a second, she only looked at him, locking his gaze with her own, until finally she moistened her lower lip with her tongue, cocked her neck, allowed her eyes a brief flicker to check him out now that she was up close, and then spoke.

"So then, big spender? I haven't seen you around her yet; you get lured in here by one of those coupons?"
 
Lewis was now in heaven he thought as she sat next to him and even spoke.

“Big spender? Nahh, I am just here to chip in. But yes I am here by the magic of a coupon.”

He chuckled and than shook his head as he though that was a stupid thing to say, he took a large swig of his beer and he couldn’t take his eyes away from her.

“I told the waitress that I would get you a drink, so get whatever you want.”

She was very beautiful, her sparkly naval ring caught his eyes, but he was always drawn back to her eyes, the way she licked her bottom lip was very sexy and even inviting.

“So what brings you over here?”

He kept on smiling, but he thought of something:

It was her eyes that were so alluring.
 
Nina

Nina smiled as he offered her a drink. "Why thank you very much, Mr. Coupon! That's quite generous of you!" She turned to the bartender and ordered a white russian, and then while the drink was being made she glanced over at him again. The real reason she'd been drawn to him, of course, was that nagging familiariaty; did she know this guy? He was pretty good looking... hell, he was great looking, but it was the playful mop of hair on his head she got a kick out of most.

"What brings me over here? Well... a girl's gotta end up somewhere, right? So why not next to the guy who just stuffed a 20 down her panties?" She winked at him, then swept up the drink as the bartender sat it down on the bar. She licked at one of the ice cubes, looking over the rim of the glass at the guy, before she took a drink. When she put it back down, the white froth clung to her upper lip. She let it sit there for a moment before licking most of it away with a darting tongue movement and then wiping away what remained with her thumb. She then licked the tip of her thumb clean, swiveling slightly from side to side on the bar stool with gentle pushes with her foot, which she'd propped up against the lower leg of his stool; her foot was less than an inch from his ankle, but she made sure to avoid any direct contact between them, for now.

"Anyway, what's your name? I don't wanna have to call you 'Coupon' for the rest of the night! And what brings you to a place like this? Lookin' for trouble?" She took a second sip of her drink as he answered.
 
This girl was something else, she was so enchanting and alluring, he didn’t even know that was possible to have both qualities in one woman, but here he was in front of her. He laughed a bit when she called him “Mr. Coupon” and the fact that she wanted to be next to the guy that put twenty dollars down her G-string.

“Oh, I apologize about putting the money somewhere I shouldn’t have, I thought you wanted me to, I didn’t mean to offend you, but since you are over here, I guess that I didn’t.”

He watched her drink her beverage and she was teasing while she did it. He adjusted himself as he did so and he looked to her.

“You are quite good at capturing the attention of those that you want, but my name is Lewis. I am here just to relax after a hard day of ritual routine, just come to kick back and of course see beautiful women.”

He smiled and than ran his hand through his shaggy hair.

“So what is your name, or do Angels not have names?”

He knew it was a cheesy thing to say, but he was in a strip bar, so why the hell not, look like a complete loser.

“But I am sure you hear things like that all the time, so sorry.”

He smiled.

“Trouble, I am not looking for it, but if some comes my way, I will deal with it.”

He drank the last bit of his drink and he turned and found another one waiting.

“So I hear you are the best one in the joint, why is that might I ask?”
 
Nina

"Lewis..." Nina said, letting his name linger on her delicate tongue just an instant longer than necessary. "Nice name. And don't worry about offending me... it'd take a lot, is all I mean. And to tell the truth, I don't think I'd ever find money offensive." She finished her drink and pushed the empty cup across the table; the bartender raised an eyebrow, as if to ask if she wanted another and she waved him off with a flutter of fingers. She wanted to be in control, and more than a single drink would rob that of her. Just enough to feel the tingle of the alcohol. That's where she was now, and that's where she wanted to be. She noticed him adjusting himself and smiled.

"So tell me, Lewis. Are you comfortable yet? I'm not sure how you could be, personally, perched on that ridiculous barstool. I know I'm not comfortable on these. Why don't we move across the room, over to one of those cozy little booths over there?" She indicated the large circular booth with a tilt of her head. She didn't wait for an answer; she stood and started walking over to the booth. She could hear him behind her, following her, so she put a little extra sway into her hips, sending the coiled snake tattoo just visible in the gap between shirt and skirt rocking, as if to hypnotize him.As she slid into the booth, she patted the shiny leather seat next to her. The table was small, but large enough for a few drinks.

"As for my name... well, I don't give that information out to just anyone. See, the thing is... a guy's gotta earn that little tidbit. And as for me being the best one here... well, to be honest, I'd have to ask 'best at what?'" She winked at him. "And to be honest, the answer'd be yes. I'm the best. If you think you can keep up with the best, Lewis... have a seat."
 
He looked over to where she was motioning to.

“I am comfortable anywhere my dear, but to be next to a Angel like you, I think that is a lot more comfortable.”

He smiled at her and motioned for another drink. Before he had a chance to get the beer, he was watching her oh so heavenly ass sway back and forth walking way from him, like a puppy dog he chased after her, his tongue hanging out of his mouth. That tattoo was interesting, so artistic, he loved tattoos and especially ones that girls got. When she motioned for him to sit down on the leather seat he did so and he gazed into her eyes as she again was casting her spell over him.

“Yes this is more comfortable than those bar stools. But what goes on back here?”

He saw the waitress walk over and he saw it was the same one and she knew what he wanted.

“You want something to drink Angel?”

He waited for her to tell her, but he started in on her questions.

“I have heard that you are the best dancer and best seducer in the place, and that it was all because of you that this place is packed the way it is. Very impressive, I would like to try to keep up with the best, but that depends on what we are doing?”

He cocked an eyebrow up and smiled.

“So harsh to not tell a man your name, so I guess I will just have to earn it and call you Angel for now.”

He waited for his beer as he was getting a bit nervous sitting next to a woman of this caliber. He felt his cock was hard as she was just sitting there, what kind of power this woman had over him, how was it possible, he had to gain some kind of control back over this situation.
 
Nina

Nina again declined the offer for a drink, then turned her attention back to Lewis.

"Angel suits me fine for now, Lewis." She coyly crossed her legs and leaned back against the side of the booth, her arms draped over the top of the padded backrest as she looked across the table at him. She caught her lower lip between her teeth for a moment as she listened to him.

"Best dancer? What do you think? Nevermind that, I know what you think. And if I'm the best dancer... being the best seductress kinda goes with the territory, don't you think? Only..." she trailed off, then glanced out at the floor as a new song began and that tall blonde bitch Anna took the stage. In many ways, Anna was the opposite of Nina; she was in her full on "innocent school girl" getup now, and the guys down at the edge of the stage were already getting worked up. She watched to see if she'd really hooked Lewis, or if Anna would distract him before she finished her thought.

"That little number you saw me do on stage was nothing. If you wanna see a real dance... a dance just for you... all you have to do is push that pretty little pink button on the wall behind you." She smiled mysteriously at him.
 
Lewis heard the music change and his eyes never left this Angels sitting right next to him.

“I guess it was a dumb things to say, the first second I saw you, I knew you were the best dancer in the joint, that is why I couldn’t take my eyes off of you, the other girls are probably pretty mad that I ignored them, but I don’t really care.”

He did glance off to see that new woman on the stage and he sighed.

“Some girls just try to hard, blondes are so overrated, I like the suddle girls like you, one that can change your entire night in a instant, with out making you see something that I can see just by walking down the street, blonde hair blue eyes, to many out there.”

He heard her say something about a button behind him for a dance and he was curious.

“What kind of dance are we talking about?”

Like a little kid he just pressed it and waited to see what would happen.

“If it is a lap dance, am I supposed to keep my hands to myself like most places or is this vip?”

He smiled again, he has never before been so nervous around a stripper before, what was with him. He again adjusted himself.

“Or is it a normal dance in front of me?”

What was this dance about, he thought it was stage dance and than in the back lap dance, but he didn’t see any body else getting dances, he smiled at her as she seemed to be in full control, had to see if he could get some back.

“Do I get a little sample before the main to see if you really are the best, or are you just going to make me take your word for it?”

He again smiled, he hoped she wasn’t going to be offended by what he said, but she seemed like a really cool person, so he just continued to smile at her.
 
Nina

Nina just watched him, listened to him, waited for him to do something stupid. And although he couldn't seem to stop talking... that was hardly stupid. She could tell he was nervous, but he hadn't tried to impress her, hadn't made any overt passes at her, and certainly hadn't set off a creep vibe. In fact, she'd decided finally he was really fucking cute.

He pushed the button and kept on talking, but when the thick black silk curtain slid out of the wall behind his head, he jumped a little. The curtain slid out in a gentle arc around their booth, quickly and fluidly locking into place on the opposite side and enclosing them in their own private place in the club. They could still hear the sound of the music outside the booth, but the curtains were thick, and the sounds were muffled.

"You might wanna grab your drink, Lewis. Oh, and watch your knees," she said. An instant later, the table between them slid down into the floor, brushing by their knees until it clicked into place on the floor. At the same time. a small shelf flipped up near Lewis' hand; a place for his drink.

"There... much better," Nina said as she stood and stepped onto the polished circle on the floor that was just recently a tabletop. The pressure of her weight caused a ring of soft lights to click on around the circle, lighting her from below.

"As for this dance? You suppose correctly, Lewis. For now, it's hands off."
 
Lewis was really surprised that this place had things like this, the ring of curtain and the electronic tables, wow, was he really in a strip club or was this some kind of other place.

“Wow this place is really high tech, I guess with a Angel like you in the place, you bring the cash in. Again Very Impressive.”

He saw her standing there with the lights only enhancing her beauty.

“I never wanted to break the rules, 300 hundred pound bouncers kicking my ass don’t seem like a good idea, but I would think of breaking the rules.”

He didn’t know what to do anymore, he was so stunned by her beauty, he took large sips of his beer, letting drops spill out every now and than.

“How is it possible that I have met a woman of your caliber in a place like this?”

She could tell he was obviously a shy nerdy type around the women, but was there more to him.

“So what dance will I be seeing?”

The music pulsed outside and Lewis just kept on trying to hide his erection and stop being nervous, but everything he was trying wasn’t working.
 
Nina

Nina could tell he was nervous, and for a moment, she let her facade slip. She smiled at Lewis, an honest, friendly smile, and said, "Don't worry; just relax. Let me take care of you," she whispered, just loud enough he could hear her, and then she was back in character.

As she began to dance for him, the lights below pulsated and flashed gently. Other lights, reds and blues mostly, came and went, giving the room a strange, almost dreamlike sensation. Her dance was slow, seductive, and hypnotic. She undulated, her body like a ribbon of black and pale pink writhing in some exotic sea. She kept her eyes on him at times, while at others she released his gaze to allow him to watch other parts of her. She spun slowly in place, reached for the dark ceiling above, and slid her hands down her sides, crossing over her hips and then down over her legs as she bent over toward him. Her cleavage hung into view, and for a moment Lewis could look down between her breasts and out the lower side.

Nina straightened up, and as she did, her fingers caught the lower hem of her tshirt. Her hands kept rising, and as they did they pulled her shirt up, over her breasts, and then over her head. She still wore the black silk bikinni top, but now he would see how her nipples had hardened and pressed against the flimsy fabric.

Nina's hands slid back down her body, and her thumbs hooked the hem of her dark red skirt. In a heartbeat, she had lowered her skirt as well, revealing her thong. As she stepped out of the skirt pooled around her feet, she climbed silkilly up into Lewis' lap, a knee on either side of his hips as the lap dance began.
 
This had to be Lewis dying and being in heaven, an Angel like her being here had to be a dream or a vision. He heard her tell him to relax and let her take care of him, just those words warmed him up and sent shivers coursing through his body. He has never heard words like that from a woman and it felt good to hear, but he had to keep in mind that this was only for money, but he could not tear his gaze away from her eyes, she had the most enchanting eyes he has ever seen.

“Oh wow… I must be dead and in heaven…”

He saw the graceful movements and felt his cock get harder in his pants, but he adjusted himself again and smiled at her. There before him was this Angel and her bra containing her magnificent breasts, which were begging to be let free, than her skirt dropped and she was wearing that black G-string again and he felt his mouth start to water, but he shook his head as he felt her get on top of him.

“So this is the lap dance part…”

He gulped as he again took a large swig of his beer, the top of his shirt was wet with beer, but his focus was on her.

“So beautiful… so perfect… wow…”

She heard a soft moan come from his mouth as she ever so lightly grazed his leg with her soft skin, she had some kind of effect on him that never before any woman has captured. Sweat beaded on his forehead as he looked up to his Angel and he breathed a little heavier.

"Perfection."
 
Nina

Nina resisted the urge to giggle in appreciation at his compliments; wouldn't do to look silly when you're trying to be all gothed-up and in charge, eh? Instead, she began to writhe before him, swaying her hips back and forth over his, the insides of her knees and thighs brushing against the outside of his as she did. She leaned forward, placing her hands against the wall to either side of his head as she presented her breasts to him, allowing them to sway hypnotically only a few inches from his face. Her hands slid down the wall, and then they were on his shoulders, transmitting the energy of her swaying motions down her arms and into him. She continued the dance for what seemed like forever, finally running her hands up the sides of his face, tracing the strong outline of his jaw, and then running her fingers through his hair.

Then her hands withdrew, and she laid them upon her own body. She ran them up her trim, flat belly, jostling the ring at her navel before she cupped her breasts, lifting them, pressing them together. She teased the silk-covered nipples with the tips of her fingers, and sighed, then leaned back in to brush them against his brow. As she did, she lowered herself just enough that her silk-encased sex graced over the erection trapped in his pants. She didn't dry-hump him, as much as she suddenly wished she could... She was surprised at how suddenly she realized she wanted to fuck him, and actually a little scared. She heard his breath hitch, and realized she was almost going to unclasp her bra.

She caught herself at the last moment, and somehow managed to take the dance back under control. She needed this job. Management had made it perfectly clear when they'd hired her; no funny stuff. You could do whatever you wanted with the customers, but no skin, no nudity, no sex. No funny stuff. "Let them get their thrills and then go home to their wives and girlfriends," the boss had told the dancers over and over.

She stood and blew Lewis a kiss. "And alas, my dear Lewis... that is all the law will let me do." She knew that if she stayed in the booth with him for a moment more she'd give in... do something that'd get her fired. And so, without further word, she slipped gently out of the booth and fled backstage.

Leaving behind her shirt and skirt...
 
Light moans of pleasure escaped his mouth as he was highly enjoyed this. She was filling him up with so much good feelings, but he knew he should not get over excited, she was a dancer and he was the customer, there were rules here and if he stepped over them he would get kicked out and get his ass kicked and he wanted to see this Angel again.

“You are too much for me Angel…”

Than she was gone out of this booth, was it something he did or something he said.

“Angel… wait.”

He looked down and he saw her shirt and skirt, he looked back to that button and he pressed it again, but nothing happened. So many thoughts ran through his head, he looked to her clothes and back to where she ran away. He stood up and walked out of the curtain and the waitress was right there.

“Ummm… excuse me, can you tell that Angel that I am sorry for whatever it was that I did and she forgot her skirt and shirt and the money. Here is what I owe you as well.”

He handed her about three hundred dollars and he smiled.

“Just charge my card for all my drinks and I will meet you at the bar.”

The waitress was a bit stunned and she ran to the bar to close his tab out, she handed his card to him and Lewis only smiled.

“This is a good place, as long as that Angel is here.”

He headed to the door and the bouncers saw him out and Lewis sat there in his car.

“Why is it that good things never last?”

He started his car up and let the engine run.
 
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